The story has potential. But is way too slow due to info dumps all the time. Please try to avoid explaining every single thing in so much detail. Let us discover things as they happen as well.

5 stats to mana and he would doulble his leveling speed. That was dumb not to use it.

Looks like someone put a gun in the authors head and forced him to write a book within one day. Everything is so rushed... Don't recommend. There are better crafting themed novels out there.

You can skip the whole chapter and read the last two paragraphs.

2 meters tall? Really? That's lower than a common one story house roof. The author is that ignorant and is just throwing numbers around? Sometimes is miles then the next paragraph is meters.

Dropping. Author should have stick to mcs pov. This story sucks.

It's unbearable. Everytime he has something super convenient that the author never mentioned. "oh, then Mc used a letter that he got from someone" "oh, now is 100m because I need it to be, so let me put some random reason here that I've never mentioned before" Why don't you write things as they happen? Instead of telling us something that happened in the story that was important to the plot, the Mc knows, but we were left out. /rantend

Damn, another virgin Mc.

The story is good, but I really hate to read when the author writes like a old bard. Cringe as hell.

Interesting, good background and has lots of potential, but the author is still in his infancy when it comes to writing. Info dump everywhere, description of important events are ignored, characters are the most fake I have ever seen. Forced bullying, forced situations, no credibility at all. The Mc is dumb, ignorant of his own powers and is a suckrr for girls. Even the good old cliches are badly done here. The grammar and English of this, is almost umbereable. Needs some seeeerious editing to become readable. But again, is has potential, but the author seems to never have read a good written novel before. Maybe in the hands of a different writer, this can be a good gem. At last, good luck author. Hope you become a hellaof writer and comes back to redo this one. Good luck.

He was dumb asf