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Gamblejay

Gamblejay

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2017-06-27 JoinedUnited States
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    Gamblejay1yr
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    I tried to give this a shot, really did. 140 Chapters in and finally small things have begun to change. Over an issue that could have been solved 120 chapters ago. If your going to do magical realism and focus on family issues at least make them somewhat realistic. The writing quality and story devolpment are hard to follow. There really isnt much going on. And the scenes make you just stare and think, what? The character design is all over the place. One minute someone is a 10/10 all powerful then acts like a 1/10 in the next scene just to keep the unrealistic rolling plot going. The book does have good updates though. But even for those like myself who enjoy a bit of constant face slapping, this one was a stretch.

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