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Long winded, slow advance. this chapter is nothing but filler.
A new name per chapter good...
not reference to tools or anything, is the mc so foolhardy or the author?
boom, your head author really...
"He/she" is used for persons(human elf etc) the rest use "It" (items,beasts,world,weather,clothes etc)
The gender of little knife is wrong in this chapter
R.I.P Big brother...
aetherion or aldora
bad start, changing names in just a chapter...