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Either the order is wrong or there is a new translator who arbitrarily changed the names of a bunch of things...
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Enjoying the story so far, although Arthur "doesn't respond at all" basically every chapter, which I think takes away from his character and gets tedious (he just seems rude, not prideful or charismatic). Additionally, the author might want to look at adjective order as the way the author orders adjectives is strange and irregular to native speakers. On a positive note, the various power systems are cool and interesting (knight, magus, evolutionary)
It seems like we've been getting more snippets of information than usual where (and this might be inaccurate), it feels like in previous volumes we had at least one string become clear but here we just keep getting overloaded with more info. I might be completely off base with this idea and it's just an emotional response with no real logic behind it.
Another time skip summary chapter where things are intentionally made mysterious... I enjoy the detail put into the world but it feels like we have been learning so many tiny parcels of information since the end of the last volume which is getting tiring and confusing. Anyways, enjoying it overall and keep up the good work, but I wanted to state my (maybe unwarranted) criticism.
I'll check a bit more in detail later but from what I could find he never really ordered Arnulf to desperately expand nor did he ever present disapproval for how Arnulf treated the natives before this so jumping from "you're doing fine let's ignore you" to "you commited treason is" feels too great of a leap. Especially since the Kaiser would respond similarly in Arnulf's shoes if someone went against his orders. In the end to me, it just doesn't feel justified to execute someone Berengar gave the discretion of leading the colony to, for attempting to punish those who defied his commands. The punishment doesn't fit the crime and feels drastic.
If the Kaissr ordered not to attack someone, and his citizens did he would have them harshly punished if not killed for their insolence. Berengar never actually said he want Arnulf to expand even if it meant killing all the natives he said, "My friend, these two young women will be instrumental to your ties with the locals. They speak our tongue well enough, and one of them is fluent in fifteen other languages. Make sure they are well cared for during my absence." At least, this was when he was appointed I'm not sure if I'm missing something in later chapters but from what I could find/remember there was no demand to expand at all costs. Perhaps Arnulf made mistakes in Berengar's opinion but he certainly didn't violate orders or do anything worth being executed for, based on what Berengar told him when he left.
I don't really understand how what Arnulf did was considered treason? If anything he did as he was empowered to do (lead the colony to success as he wished) and the colonists disobeyed and fled which seems more grounds to treason than what he did, especially since there's no way Berengar would be merciful to those who disobeyed his orders... It's just a bit unnerving how off the rails Berengar has gone about "German superiority" versus when he was more about protecting what was his...