Bodhi

Alucard can be either. Can’t genderbend what’s already bent.

Bruce on life support

>Is aware of mutants >Shoots someone he thinks is a mutant >Dude survives >Shocked a “mutant” survived being shot Bro

Well, I can somewhat say there’s little to no AI involved in this writing. Because that’s terrible dialogue. It looks like you’re trying to go for “gentleman” terrorist who’s always a few steps ahead, but you gotta make the dialogue work for that kind of MC. So far the dialogue’s been cringy and trying too hard.

Lmfao, you just proved my point. Bravo

Brother. You’re on some incel shit. I’d recommend laying off harem fics for a while and touch some grass.

Y’know. This is one of my pet peeves when it comes to fanfiction. I know you’re trying to gas up your MC but these OOC lines just takes me out of the immersion. Ultron would never say something like this. He’s a being of logic. Not someone who’d show “fear” like this. At most he’d be puzzled, curious. Not saying some stupid shit like, “yoU’rE a MoNsTer oooouugh” At the very least, this was saved by the next few lines.

Huh. Is there a reference for this? Afaik SHIELD wasn’t aware of them until Strange came along. Ik this is AU but you gotta make things consistent. If Kamar Taj and SHIELD already has a partnership, why is this the first time another infinity stone was mentioned? If the battle of New York happened, then the AO should be well aware of the Space Stone, and this scene would be happening while New York is under siege.

Did devils in the anime talk this way? If not, then the author is huffing pure Chinesium with this.