If I remember correctly there is a scp that is a vending machine that makes which liquid you write its name. That solves the problem.

Draw his blood and make your own super soldier. That way you don't have as many variables.

What a waste of time...

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Raven is showing you off with this story.

I'm dying to try this novel but anyway thanks for the warning.👍🏼

The story is progressing in the last few chapters.

You already convinced me to pay the subscription.

Well I only read it up to chapter 5 and left it. You have to turn off your brain because I don't understand the logic of this novel, it skips too many things in 5 chapters.I can't imagine what the rest will be like but I'll save myself the trouble. It has 100 billion that is familiar and all that but it forgets to present basic things. I'm not asking for much just a little consistency.In the scenario presented at the beginning of the story.

90% of it is a copy and paste and the rest is interesting but it doesn't give it enough importance and it doesn't develop anything and doesn't change anything. Read until the eternals until there I endure.

Yes, it took you a while to take the leap. Good luck 👍🏼

Review

Those people are important at this point in the story because the levels of power you have shown leave them out of the game.🤔

Do you have plans for your people so that they improve by giving them a magical fruit tree (that only their family controls) or something similar 🤔

You should include a mini training section so as not to leave a huge hole in the story.

It is translated. Writing quality is passable considering the level of the page. Updates are constant and may change in the future. The characters leave a lot to be desired since we have no information about anything except the most basic until chapter 13. The development of the story is very slow and with no development. The world is blank, only 3 factions have been shown, the rest are blank. Good idea but with too many things wasted on the protagonist he has not done anything to improve his life of all the things you have to earn money you draw drawings.That is the most wasted 16 years that is seen and shows none of the common or basic knowledge of the previous life. Good idea but it makes you a little angry at all the lost potential. Good luck

Haha there is no problem if the author takes a year per chapter since that waits until the author dropped it (ese hijo de ***** no aviso hasta después de 2 años que no iba a continuar su historia)

Is it necessary to have prior knowledge to understand? Because cloud and heard nothing of what your novel is based on.