Ahwake
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Ahwake2yrCommentedCh 2 A Foreign World- Ahwake2yrCommented
Who is having such a complete conVersation in the middle of a big fight
"Those old guys? Humph, when there was a battle in the past, had they ever really come out to fight? Since they are that old, they must cherish their lives very much. Not to mention they also have their family members who need to be taken care of. Sigh, I actually feel quite sorry for their lives." - Ahwake2yrCommented
His accelerated training superpower made him become neither servile or overbearing quicker than his peers and he wants everyone to know it
Vincent was neither servile nor overbearing. His decent performance made their eyes light up. - Ahwake2yrCommentedCh 37 That Sword Technique, Too Powerful!
- Ahwake2yrCommented"Got cursed. Passive Points +2."
- Ahwake2yrCommentedThe man holding the long spear was walking in Lin Xiu's direction!
- Ahwake3yrCommentedCh 59 It Was Probably Because Of Second Miss Lu
- Ahwake3yrCommentedCh 54 What Sort Of Dumb Luck Did Lu Liangwei Possess
- Ahwake3yrCommentedCh 375 Helping Jian Yumin Win (3)
- Ahwake3yrCommentedCh 374 Helping Jian Yumin Win (2)
- Ahwake3yrReplied to ZinonWonder
I get that, but the location of the sect will never change so it doesnt make sense for the reward to increase because its in the location that it has always been in
[Rewards: 6000 Kill Points] - Ahwake3yrCommented
Is this the Manual hes looking for?
This chapter has been deleted. - Ahwake3yrCommented
The gracious sword sect is only in the lower realm... Why would the reward increase because of the location?
[Rewards: 6000 Kill Points] - Ahwake3yrCommentedThis book has been deleted.
- Ahwake3yrPosted
In my opinion this is not a fanciful and great story written by a wordsmith that has been practicing their craft for years... That being said, this type of novel is one of the reasons I fell in love with webnovels. Outlandish abilities, an overpowered main character, absurd reasoning that almost makes sense, and a pattern that makes you want to come back for more. As I said, this is by no means a 5 star novel but I will pick it for the charm of the story over any other story being voted on at the moment. thanks for reading my personal opinion and good luck EXP SECT!!
- Ahwake3yrReplied to BeardedReader
Listen here buddy, thats the part we dont talk about. I think its perfectly reasonable to discuss the plot holes as we see them considering its a little more awKward to talk about the other holes that are about to show up
After a quick exchange, they all nodded at each other. They didn't let the absence of 1 guy stop them, as they quickly tried to surround me. They won't use anything that could 'damage' me though, so they would probably try to subdue me instead. After all they want me alive, and in top condition.