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Intil_O

Intil_O

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2017-09-17 JoinedGlobal
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O2yr
    Commented

    Nepotism

    "Come now daughter, why don't you relax for once and join us for some tea!"
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    Ascension of the Immortal Asura
    Fantasy · rRandom
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O2yr
    Commented

    U should use the concept of them evolving to be caveman at the end

    Ch 9 Friend or foe (part 4)
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    Return of the Woodcutter
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O2yr
    Commented

    He fat or swolle?

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    Return of the Woodcutter
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O2yr
    Commented

    I understand that u didnt like ghe ranking So I think u should give a open ending to this part and start another book for the other part If u want later or not.

    Ch 250 Hiatus
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    Epoch: A Berserker's Rise
    Games · SlyOW
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O2yr
    Posted

    Really great novel that has good development. it's slow but it doesn't feel so at least for me. I would recommend it to anyone who wants to read a story of a guy competing for a throne he doesn't even want lol. the cultivation levels until now arent that much only 3 till now (probably will have more in the future) and the MC doesn't have the slowest nor the fastest power rise.

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    Rise of the Great Emperor
    Eastern · XiaoXiaoYi
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O2yr
    Commented
    Ch 276 Shards of Glass
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    Gael's Naughty Angel: A Mafia Prince Romance
    Urban · NixxxiE
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O2yr
    Commented
    Ch 276 Shards of Glass
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    Gael's Naughty Angel: A Mafia Prince Romance
    Urban · NixxxiE
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O2yr
    Commented

    kirin?

    Kirii
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    Ascension of the Immortal Asura
    Fantasy · rRandom
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O3yr
    Commented
    Angela couldn't take her eyes off him, wanting to see if he was hiding something, but it was hard to guess. It seemed as though he and her father were good friends, seeing as they were okay during dinner—more than okay, actually. It looked like they were best friends now.
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    Gael's Naughty Angel: A Mafia Prince Romance
    Urban · NixxxiE
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O3yr
    Commented

    wrong chapter

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    Epoch: A Berserker's Rise
    Games · SlyOW
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O3yr
    Commented

    he is 1

    "To become the Strongest Swordsman in the World."
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    One Piece: Path to Power
    Anime & Comics · Paradox_
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O3yr
    Posted

    In the 40 chapters, I have read this story is really solid, the characters are good the mc is smart and hard-working, the gene system is complex and has many possibilities so if the author uses it well it will be really intresting.

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    The Great Genetic Era
    Eastern · Pig Sanbu
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O3yr
    Commented

    the concepts at least the next level after sovereign like god or whatever concepts should be much harder to master even though he is a genius cause he is to overpowered like this

    Ch 235 Second Restriction
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    Epoch: A Berserker's Rise
    Games · SlyOW
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O3yr
    Commented

    do u mean 70?

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    Epoch: A Berserker's Rise
    Games · SlyOW
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  • Intil_O
    Intil_O3yr
    Commented

    just make a strong cast of side characters like red Strom if u have read it or one-piece the characters can be his brother, his disciples, or anyone else. I always give my 2 power stones to u for ur consistency and enjoyable story.

    Ch 199 Losing some and gaining some
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    Epoch: A Berserker's Rise
    Games · SlyOW
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