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Mogickan5dCommentedCh 155 Volume 10 : PROLOGUE- Mogickan9dCommented
Nah. She already made the first move with that wink. Lol
'So we are watching in her room! Awesome! That way, I'll be able to make the first move and see how she reacts.' Asher smiled in his heart, excited. - Mogickan16dCommented
Ass->was ?
And besides, the only way they would get caught ass if he wanted them to get caught or if they happened to be getting spied on by a powerful expert that intentionally went through a lot to not alert his spread-out senses. - Mogickan16dCommented
Ans -> and?
Raising her head and howling at the dawning sky, Zayda forgot to try for decorum ans really, Evian did not care either way. If they happened to get caught, he was much too shameless to care. He saw no reason he would need to feel ashamed that he was bringing a lover of his to pleasure, especially to strangers he had not even exchanged words with. - Mogickan16dCommented
Forgot the v in evian’s name
"~Oh Yes— YESSSS~" Zayda groaned out loud and E Ian simply encouraged with even more enthusiastic squeezes of her tits. - Mogickan16dCommented
Typos in here… what is “his be we”?
Evian was at first disappointed to no longer have the funbags in his hold but was quickly appeased by his be we of Zayda's ass in all its rambling glory. Every strike it made against his crotch and the very lower part of his stomach, caused the voluminous backside to ripple. - Mogickan23dCommented
She spoke up? I dont see her saying anything… author i think you let your imagination get carried away and forgot to write a few scenes. Lol
Assuming control of the Array Eye, Eren lightened Alephee's load upon his appearance within the Array Formation. As she observed Eren, she spoke up. - Mogickan28dCommentedCh 646 A Bet (III)
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Couldnt help but ruminate on what Ves’s counter argument would be for several hours.. and remembered a certain CFA captain in charge of a CFA battleship that crashed on a certain planet who was a Five Scrols Compact member. If the CFA want to declassify the compact and use the fact that Ves’s mother is a member of the compact then why cant he tjrow shade on the CFA and bring up that captain. Question The Red CFA’s authenticity/lineage with this fact. Oh, and what about the fact that his mother was dead and or a spirit for most of his life and never taught him anything until recently. Amd rember that prophecy where ves was in chains? Depending on what happens next it might become reality.
Ch 5778 Distorted Retelling - Mogickan1mthCommentedCh 633 All Possibilities
- Mogickan2mthCommentedCh 168 Grappling with them cakes?!!
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- Mogickan2mthReplied to MogickanCh 447 Chapter 447
- Mogickan2mthCommented
Hmm… the writing has visibly degraded and has gone from the deeply detailed and well thought out and written style of the first 300 chapters i deeply enjoyed to this… hurried incomplete mistake ridden draft like style. Are you ok author? Have u burnt out? If so pls step back from your writing and take a day or two off to relax and refresh yourself. The book will aleays be waiting for you when you ate ready. No need to push yourself.
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