neobenmike

If I want to pay for a common mediocre fanfiction, I will have to be in an asylum bored out of mind.

it becomes dumber and dumber to the point that a paragraph has its own title

Dumbass mc doing dumbass shit doing his best to rub two dying braincells together

a pedo story of grooming

This is shit, why would I support shit

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good enough, but be warned that the same overused character like ace will have a major part in this fanfiction as author admitted, if you are tired reading about overused one piece characters then this isn't for you

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hopefully he won't be kiyotaka's doormat using guilt and whatever

It was a good idea that is executed abysmally, it is sheer brain rot with too much stupidity, I can only suspend my disbelief a foot or two high but not suspend it into space