This story is promising keep it up :D

Keep it up so far a captivating story. Could just like alittle bit more, in each chapter feel that I’m done reading in a fraction of a second.

Interesting story keep it up 👍

Ty for the chapter keep up the work. Noticed some small mistakes.. no space between, and the next one is mode the correct word would be mood doesn’t remove the enjoyment of the story :D

Omg the autocorrect is horrendous Hard to find what page you are on since name of page and the title names are different and maybe at time stop or something when it’s released keep up the good work

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No I think the story is great fun so far could I add dates to the chapter and maybe have a corresponding name hard du find what page I are on dice the pages are 40 something but the title says 16 or what ever keep up the good work

I went to the website but it’s only 18.1 ?

Why are the word jumbled

Good so far just be oops on the name it says Zachary patter his chest not odin :)

I Don't understand why? He doesn't want to join the army because it restrictiv but the special forces with no choice, if they say he has to do something is ok o.0?

Keep up the work looking forward to see what your story will bring in the future keep it up[img=recommend]

Hello ice have been reading the story so far and have noticed that everything is very rushed, its like scenes in between are cut out if that make sense

One of the better Stories on this site imo so keep up the great work

Lol