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is astley supposed to be Isekai?
Ending by saying it was the last time you would see her is bad writing, as it's authorial foretelling rather than in story portends. Also, rewriting some of the earlier chapters is fine to do but never do them before you finish the story otherwise you end up burning out. Way too many authors have tried it, and they end up frustrated because they are rehashing old stuff when they really want to put out new stuff. It's just not worth the risk until the first draft is done