I really like the story and characters, the warfare and such. I just can't stand all the porn chapters, 5 chaps in a row of pure R-18 is just BS. It's just lazy writing and a form to write easy and quick chapters to fulfill the weekly amount.
Best new series in the website by far. The definition of a breath of fresh air in regards to current and previous novels. Only issue is that sometimes everything gets to convoluted and complicated with the mystique background and folklore.
Just by the way you expressed yourself and the amount of care you showed in just a couple lines of text for a simple review, have earned you a new reader. I'll let you know later my opinion of your work. Keep it up!
It's great. Good world building. There's a pretty weird narrative set up of constantly tell the story through flashbacks. But pretty good in my opinion.