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Silent_Dawn

Silent_Dawn

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Avid reader. Casual writer.

2017-04-08 JoinedPhilippines
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn2mth
    Posted

    Meh, wasted time just for a free ticket. Story is gonna be padded out soon to slow down the progress because the MC is too OP and milk more chapters lmao.

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    Global Beast Taming: Awakening Top 10 SSS Talents at the Beginning
    Eastern · The golden robe is like a dragon
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn2mth
    Posted

    good Lord this novel became filler galore after chapter 200+ kept rambling on unnecessary characters with no future character development do not read, waste of time

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    Videogame: Charge Ten Billion On Day One And Got A SSS-grade Talent
    Games · Windhunter
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn5mth
    Commented

    good job, ChatGPT

    Sure, here is the text with the grammar and syntax fixed, sentence structure improved, flow enhanced, and extra content removed:
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    Fey Evolution Merchant
    Eastern · Amber Button
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn7mth
    Commented

    Too fast paced, the story has passed the 2nd day of cataclysm yet they already have a term for "divine runemasters", as if it simply popped out of their minds and they accepted it as is. tier system seems useless if at the beginning the MC could immediately fight 3 tiers above his level

    Ch 13 The Tier-Four Ant King
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    Divine Rune Awakening: Starting With Various Divine Runes and Dominating the World
    Urban · Eternal Regret
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn8mth
    Posted

    average bait, bad quality beyond the trial read, would not recommend.translation is obviously based on MTL then edited to look like a real translation. do not waste your money in the chapters.

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    Everything Is Too Easy After Maxing My Talents
    Games · Sword Piercing Galaxy
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn8mth
    Posted

    past chapter 450, one would notice that this novel wasn't even translated by the team who posted this translation, just MTL translation from an aggregate site in china. quality is going downhill...

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    Monster Synthesis Master
    Games · Zhuge Wanjun
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn10mth
    Posted

    The ending ruined a good book. characters are one dimensional, all best friends of MC either die or disappear from the story, having no more show time. no resolution for the promises or wishes of the MC to restore those who have died, or even the plot of the demon race. the ending switches up terms as well, making it confusing if he reached supreme realm and then the realm above that, which was the Sage realm. do you want to read it? yes, just imagine before reading the final chapter that the MC was caught by a supreme instead and was killed and refined. much better than this ending.

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    Worldwide Simulation Era
    Urban · White Divine Crane
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn1yr
    Posted

    the current novel finished its first arc, the lower realm. the 2nd arc is a carbon copy of another novel, the most generous master ever, down to the interaction and experiences of the MC, as well as his setting, so far. would I continue to read it? no. I'll wait for until the second realm he has ascended to faces calamity, maybe there is some different interactions there. quite disappointing to read two novels in one work, with the other one being a direct copy.

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    Disciple Cashback System: I Got Exposed By My Disciple
    Eastern · Three Golden Crow
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn1yr
    Commented

    it has potential to grow

    Ch 40 Campus Celebrity
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    I Have A God Simulator
    Urban · Ring Of Power
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn1yr
    Commented

    abrupt ending meaning the author got tired or the ratings already began to fall because there was no major plot or fight scenes making it boring

    Ch 500 The Developer’s Younger Years, the Immortal Cultivation Simulator Is at Your Service (End of Book) (3)
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    Goddess Helps Me Simulate Cultivation
    Eastern · Goddess Help Me Simulate Cultivation
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn1yr
    Posted

    Dear all, I suggest you just read this up to the point that all the totems were killed and the wild region was defeated. Anything beyond it, starting from the Bloody Pagoda story arc, it becomes a shit show. It is better if you ended the story with "and Chu Feng liberated the planet from their worries and ushered a great change amongst his people. The end." It just gets worse and worse in story progression to the point that it feels it was being written real time by the translator/ghost writer The only good thing was its world background being diverse and interesting, giving it potential, which this novel wasted with so many trashy fillers, time jumping reenactments and story telling of events beyond the Blue Planet Arc.

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    Damn it! You Call This Beast Taming?
    Eastern · Big Big Panda
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn1yr
    Commented

    ah yes, splitting chapters to ensure one can produce lots of chapters from a short novel.

    Ch 180 Talent Evolution! Super Battle! 4
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    Pet Simulator
    Eastern · Xia Shuqin
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn1yr
    Replied to SchokoG1_

    They dropped it. The actual novel has more than 1400 chapters. The translators made up an ending lol

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    Online Game: I Possess a Monster Merging Simulator!
    Games · Mr. Gua
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  • Silent_Dawn
    Silent_Dawn2yr
    Posted

    Translation and flow of story becomes horrible. Major chapters after 150 are messed up and some of which makes no sense. it was as if the translator created his own interpretation like what happened to the novel on "I can see hidden Hints". information and flow of story is messed up, especially on lifespans and the terms used to describe per stage. one moment it's 3000 years, the next it's 500, then the next time it's 1000. disappointing, as it had a lot of good potential. do not waste time past the chapter where he becomes the Eastern Emperor, just end it there for your sakes.

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    Practicing Basic Sorcery for Billions of Times Made Me Invincible
    Fantasy · Abundance Every Year
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