Wow mad skill yow. Keep it up and all the best.

Keep up the good work. I'm loving this so far, it's really great yow. Thanks for the update.

Hey????? So far the story is good but aren't you making it seem like he not human. Am I find it weird that he keep stabbing himself even with the gamer body and mind. That can cause some kind of physiological effect I think.

all the best and many blessings to you and your loved ones.

Why it seems that they almost look like justice League??? I'm shocked when I saw this picture.

Keep it up u are doing fine. Hmmm yeah also let him learn some serious close combat if his powers is lock down like it did in he'll battle, and please give awareness of people playing dirty. Let it be a LESSON LEARNED.

I love this. It good that you are let that bald idiot know the meaning behind the word Mutant. I mean like really people.... Are for freaking real right now. Did get they get their brains replaced by joker????

Lol look like I'm not the only one who loves this novel.

why is that???

Guys please remember that even though he read the comic books of justice league/young justice. You have to remember that it a New life now so, is can be very real, and carrying such knowledge is very hard if you are trying to survive.

I second that. Too reveling, and at most it put women in a bad light.

Hope you get better, stay safe stay connected. May god be with you.

Loving it already it good. please grow him up and not make him op fast. Let him experience what life have to offer. And teach him how to walk between good and evil. Let have serious understanding that some people cannot be redeemed and if they cross the line after they got caught. PUT THEM DOWN. Or the innocent people will become monsters themselves. The no kill rule should only apply to the criminal who is trying to make a living, not those guys that kill and hurt for the pleasure of others people pain. Keep it up hope you stay safe.