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Dreamseer3yrCommented"How many times have you mixed a batch? 4 or 5? You're a f****** animal."
Varo was a married man. He used to have many slaves working for him. Hence, he was not unfamiliar with this kind of culture. Unfortunately, his mind was currently not on this sort of thing. So he turned to Zhang Heng and said, "I plan to make a batch in the school bathroom. We haven't cleaned ourselves for so many days. I feel like I smell bad. How about you?- Dreamseer3yrCommented
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"Sir, are you the bailiff nearby?" someone asked. - Dreamseer3yrCommentedCh 481 I Have My Plan
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It started off decent. Basic setup of a reincarnated peerless person who can now practice. It lost me after 100 chapters or so when nearly everyone that gets introduced turns into a selfish basic antagonist. The rest of the characters are “realistic” Jealous basics. While faceslapping can be satisfying, when you build your novel almost exclusively on it, it gets old. The other problem with this novel is the near lack of character development. The protagonist is always right, the antagonist of the week is going to get reckted, and everyone is going to swoon for fives seconds before saying next antagonist is going to be the one to get him.
- Dreamseer3yrCommentedCh 365 Things Would Have Been Different If Plant Queen Was Here