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lalithkumar

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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar2mth
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    are you writing a marvel story or romance story in two chapters there is nothing much than these two flirting

    Ch 2 Boom
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    Spider-Man- The Successful One
    Anime & Comics · Poppie_1356
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar2mth
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    ravenclaw

    Ch 37 Chapter 37: “Unexpected Reunion”
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar2mth
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    even after all this happened will he still love his family ?

    Ch 24 Chapter 24: “The Turn of Fate”
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar2mth
    Replied to TalesByJaz

    after this memory altering thing even he doesn't hate remaining three members of family he shouldn't love them. like loving Charles even after that

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: “Difficult Decisions Part - 2”
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar2mth
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    +1

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    What If Naruto Had The Six Eyes & Limitless Curse Technique
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar2mth
    Commented

    only hinata

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    What If Naruto Had The Six Eyes & Limitless Curse Technique
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar2mth
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    I just hope he won't be after people's recognition and live his life to best of his abilities

    Ch -1 Prologue : The Birth of "Naruto" [Edited]
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    What If Naruto Had The Six Eyes & Limitless Curse Technique
    Anime & Comics · hasnathh
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar3mth
    Replied to Blank_black

    why is a family necessary now when he is already matured

    Ch 16 Mysterious Residues
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    Harry Potter: No More Simping
    Book&Literature · Mystic_Verse
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar5mth
    Commented

    what happened

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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar5mth
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    I really liked this as there is no romance in thisbut I hope you won't drop this

    Ch 74 Sorry About That (Part 2)
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    Beast Tamer : Start With Fire Dog
    Fantasy · Snorlax777
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar5mth
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    is this also dropped

    Ch 74 Sorry About That (Part 2)
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    Beast Tamer : Start With Fire Dog
    Fantasy · Snorlax777
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar6mth
    Commented

    great so far hope you will release more

    Ch 62 Brittney (Part 2)
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    Beast Tamer : Start With Fire Dog
    Fantasy · Snorlax777
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar6mth
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    after all this he will still follow Dumbledore's will

    Ch 108 Chapter 105
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    Harry Potter System Gamer
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar6mth
    Commented

    so dumb

    Ch 65 Welcome Party
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    The Earth After Rebirth
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar6mth
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    so he just gave away a slot in his already limited slots just for healing when he can ask felix to heal him

    "You know, that's a horrible way to play. You said you wanted a pet, I captured more beasts. I can give you one," he said trying to get this conversation as far away from money as possible.
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    The Earth After Rebirth
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar7mth
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    didn't he train all these years he is smarter than original narutoaccording to danzo he is already jonin level then he should be more powerful than jonin as he should be keeping himself hidden.

    Ch 25 CHAPTER 25: THE KYUUBI'S RESOLVE
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    Grace: A Naruto Fanfiction (Book 1)
    Anime & Comics · Royalmv
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar7mth
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    why the same routine love story in future you will pair narutoxsatsuki so now for every chapter you are building towards it.I mean is there only romance to a story

    Ch 13 CHAPTER 13: REALITY
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    Grace: A Naruto Fanfiction (Book 1)
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar7mth
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    why is naruto so weak and talentless he freed kurama so he doesn't have bad chakra controlin original he didn't learn anything as a kid but here he has minato

    Ch 25 Chapter 24: Overwhelming Zabuza
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    Alternate Naruto.
    Anime & Comics · SimpleTranslator
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar8mth
    Replied to Devils_hand

    it's not that this chapter is badmost readers read your book because of naruto now you are upgrading his enemies and mainly sasuke using his cellswe all have seen how powerful madara is after getting hashirama cells and even awakened Rinnegan.Now will sasuke also open Rinnegan?

    Ch 46 chapter 40~
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    Naruto : Pure Blood
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  • lalithkumar
    lalithkumar8mth
    Commented

    no , only hinata is enough

    Hey can i create a harem for Naruto or not, if i create a harem for Naruto then how many girls i added for Naruto's harem please comment.
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    Naruto: Reborn as Uzumaki Naruto.
    Anime & Comics · Hiddenboy76
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