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dimas1151yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1- dimas1151yrPosted
His system is weird, it is okay to system to have ego but system will not using some slank or punk language for ex. Raphael ( great sage ) it does have an ego but still using formal language. Or maybe my taste different?
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this is best fanfic i know, it is not because tge story is good, but how the author make story from different angle but looks like rational than in real movie like clint and natasha they didnt have any superpower. only snipping skill and gun skill and they dare fight with alien with ' agent responsibilies ' reasoning. this is really bulls***. if they are using ' saving the world or for friends ' reasoning then i can accept it but they didnt have that personality. natasha is spy and cclint agent. they only know ok boss
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ahhhh avenger is over. i dont how the author will patch his mess. i hope tony will not die in twin's hand
" Steve if you want to do it than go ahead, but I'm done here. There is nothing left for me to do, the fight is over, I'm going to take Nat's advice and go somewhere to relax and calm down. I wish the rest of you good luck in your future endeavors" Banner drops the mic and starts leaving - dimas1152yrCommentedCh 48 Talk & Fury's Death
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most fanfic use this reason, but i kind hela reasoning that logical,
"Thanos the 'Mad Titan' has the biggest army in the known Universe. He is from a race called Titans, and they may have the most physical strength of all races, even higher than yours Thor, in fact , the Thanos can easily go toe to toe with the Hulk, that should give you an idea of what kind of strength you are dealing with. He goes from planet to planet and wipes out half the population, his reason for this is unknown, some say he does it so the half that survives can prosper, others say because he fell in love with Lady Death he commits genocide as a gift to her" - dimas1152yrCommented
this is best fanfic i know, it is not because tge story is good, but how the author make story from different angle but looks like rational than in real movie like clint and natasha they didnt have any superpower. only snipping skill and gun skill and they dare fight with alien with ' agent responsibilies ' reasoning. this is really bulls***. if they are using ' saving the world or for friends ' reasoning then i can accept it but they didnt have that personality. natasha is spy and cclint agent. they only know ok boss
Ch 32 Quitting - dimas1152yrCommented
although he didnt want to run rampage, but he clearly knows hulk is himself. it is like your second personality is a murder when you knowing it you will feel guilty as well, and for people with high IQ they will feel more guilty because cant keep his second personality in check. if i am in hulk persepective maybe i will just shock by her sudden resign and no more
(I mean the way he looked at Nat, like she is a monster, Ironic from a guy who rampages through cities) - dimas1152yrCommented
i think he is indonesia. because malysia using kuasa for power and iindonesia using kekuatan
Kukuatan Mirac works perfectly and Ayame feels a very deep love for Mirac ... - dimas1152yrCommentedCh 15 15.Ayame Obasan
- dimas1152yrCommentedCh 90 Overpowered Loli
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it is kind confusing, he want to low profile but sometime he doing high profile in useless situation,for ex. because he staring that donna teacher someone taunting him he got mad end up saving by kevin .and this is second, if he want to low profile why do you need to commenting that second generation. also this is the most annoying in lst few chapter before this, sometimes he is like mellisa's licking dog
Ch 50 Aftermath [2] - dimas1152yrCommentedCh 36 Elective [2]
- dimas1152yrCommentedCh 8 New Student?
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the authors use trash talking too much, although sometime it will be funny but if you use too much it will become digusting. the background setting none, author didnt tell us about the world he is in,i know it is fanfiction but sometime people who hasnt read or watching it o it is better to tell us in broef about the world. character development 0,