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TemporalandReaty

TemporalandReaty

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I read a lot. You get to find out the rest yourself.

2017-06-26 JoinedUnited States
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  • TemporalandReaty
    TemporalandReaty5 years ago
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    Just a small bit of constructive criticism, On areas like "Uh-oh, you said, "it's okay," that just makes me even more nervous," could it be changed to have the inside area marked by ' rather than " so its more clear that it's within the previously marked area? It'd be like this "Uh-oh, you said 'its's okay,' that just makes me even more nervous,"