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I'm so confused. Why does he think cold blooded creatures prefer cold climates?? They don't. They live in warm climates because the sun and environment help regulate their body temperature because they can't, hence why they are called cold blooded.

You left part of the AI conversation at the end.

Minor mistake with the fight scene. By the time you started counting down the remaining bandits starting with 16, the actual count was alr eady down to 11. You forgot to count the bandits he killed between being discovered and starting the count.

Also Genjutsu would probably be super useful against basically anyone with a Rage Transformation or Boost. Hard to fight off mental attacks when your mind is already super unstable.

I mean as far as Canon goes, there's no technique to travel in space so only races like Freeza's and Cells multi-species mash-up can. And using Ki to rip through Dimension doesn't even become a thing until Buu Saga and requires Ssj3 level power at a minimum (even then it only worked for the Hyperbolic Time Chamber which who knows how that differs from normal reality) and through a very brute force and uncontrollable method. Reliable Space manipulation (besides Kai Kai and Instant Transmission) isn't really a thing in DB/DBZ/DBS.

Normally you're right but Rinnegan and Sharingan hacks are things way outside DBs usual scope and would provide a lot of tactical advantages. Enough to be a solid lead in close fights, not enough to take down a stronger foe though.

And its not really something likely to change with timelines as its a fundamental part of the cyborg process. It's not something butterflied away really.

...but the androids can't be sensed?? Like that was a pretty important plot point as its one of the reasons they couldn't find Android 20(Gero) and why Imperfect Cell could only track them down once 17 fought Piccolo. Also Seni-Perfect Cell had to blow up a bunch of islands trying to find 18 till Vegeta and Trunks interrupt.

1) He already killed a human, Jack, remember? 2) The islands network would have been down for awhile by now. He slept for 6 hours after gaining wings.

Is there a missing chapter? This one starts with a response to a question by Neuvalette but he didn't ask one last chapter.