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JarvisB

JarvisB

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2017-10-12 JoinedMyanmar (Burma)
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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB7mth
    Commented

    Is this book drop already?

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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB8mth
    Commented

    I am getting scared of reading many chapters everyday 😔

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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB8mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chap x2

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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB2yr
    Replied to PinkCulture
    Ch 136 Sucks to be you
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    All my toys
    Realistic · PinkCulture
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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB2yr
    Commented

    Starting to afraid instead of happy. Afraid you will drop the novel after all chapters.

    Ch 136 Sucks to be you
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    All my toys
    Realistic · PinkCulture
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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB2yr
    Commented
    Ch 171 Editing
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    Jack of Arts
    Urban · Intayaw_din_Dagem
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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB2yr
    Replied to Dayside

    Exactly. I personally don't mind reading 3-4 chapter in one go and wait few days to recharge

    Ch 170 A Busy Christmas Break
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    Jack of Arts
    Urban · Intayaw_din_Dagem
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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB3yr
    Commented

    Too much chapter about side characters, I think you should reduce those chapters and put it in the end of the arc. Now I am even starting to confuse which one is MC and which one is not. I do appreciate it's to build up the world but it's too much right now. Or you could say sth like this Greystones (North of --- Kingdom, 500 mil away from where), so reader can understand Ohh this location is a bit near/far from MC. Maybe he should be careful. As of now I am starting to confuse everything. there's pirate attack somewhere? An Priestess having affair somewhere? A princess scheming somewhere? and MC is doing something? Too much info dump right now. If some aren't going to appear now then you can just put their chapter only right before it appear and make it like "5 months ago".

    Ch 51 Spoiled woman
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    Anno: Igentis Bellis
    War · Raven_Aelwood
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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB3yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 48 Let's go, Viscount
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    Anno: Igentis Bellis
    War · Raven_Aelwood
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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB3yr
    Commented

    You are welcome ☺️

    Ch 54 Chp 54 : Hero of Charity?
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    Hollywood RE:CODED
    Realistic · BukanOrang
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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB3yr
    Commented

    Why don't you try Grammarly or other service. It not perfect but it will certainly reduce time

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    Hollywood RE:CODED
    Realistic · BukanOrang
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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB3yr
    Commented

    Author, you should let Al write "Angel and Demon" and "Da Vinci Code". Like High school trip to Vatican or Paris and made him an inspiration to write.

    Ch 43 Chp 43 : Candies?
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    Hollywood RE:CODED
    Realistic · BukanOrang
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  • JarvisB
    JarvisB3yr
    Replied to Sculp

    Mediterranean Hegemon of Ancient Greece on NU

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    Commonwealth
    History · MedTryglaw
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