Tks. Chapter 14 has a busted link. You can still read the chapter if you scroll from chapter 13. If you try to enter the chapter directly, you can't.

tks. by the was chapter 14 link is busted

sadpepe marionette 🤔

A nice Fanfic. A better one on the site. Hope for more fanfic. Sakura's an actual person and capable in the story. Love the development.

heroic spirit do not decay the are "immortals". imagineri dragons

Ok here is my opinion and not a review. 1. Arthur boring character in 13 chapters he doesn't do anything 2. The Beta testers are cool and their reactions in realistic The magic system and world-building can be done just like a game. You have the blueprint from your fanfic just make it the same with this story. Just sub the Marvel characters with geeks. Make a story for the player from the MC perspective and make him afraid of the players. Remember the player can RAID. Make the Players fear the MC and the WORLD fear the Players. You can also read the Legendary Mechanic and see a road to build a guild. hope this helps and good luck with the contract. You do have a talent for writing.

Was abandon only 12 chapters and the last update is 2020. So sad :(

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Perfect Kingpinkchuriki wft? TKS FOR THE CHAPTERS

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Maybe edit a bit to be "complete"? Hope that your work goes well.

Same

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

keep this fan fic a battle one. If you want a female fatal you can put something like the Ōtsutsuki that want the power lf the querks. And remember only the human race has heroes the aliens have champion.

So do you know how to progress(finish) the story or are you still stuck in a dry stop and you are miming throwe it? And glad that you are back

SAVER - IRON MAN NOT BLACK BOLT BERSERKER - HULK NOT THOR

Meng Chao absorbed the information like a sponge that had been exposed to the water not sun.

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