DarkPriest

贫民窟的游戏王

As a Marvel + Halo fan, this is basically a Marvel transmigration “system” story where the MC gets a Halo shop/points mechanic and starts buying upgrades (Mjolnir, weapons, tech) to derail canon. What works: the Halo toybox is genuinely fun at first, and Cortana is easily the best part—her “Chief” dynamic and ruthless optimization vibe carry a lot of scenes. The MC: Dom reads less like a fully rounded character and more like an efficient power-gamer. He’s pragmatic to the point of cold—treats canon like a checklist, problems like optimization tasks, and people like variables. That can be interesting, but the story rarely digs into the emotional/ethical fallout, so he often comes off as a competent but kind of hollow “win-condition” protagonist. What doesn’t: the writing is rough, the story keeps stopping for store menus and point accounting, and most Marvel characters feel more like props/checkpoints than real voices. Power scaling ramps fast, so tension often turns into “I can fix this if I buy the right thing,” which undermines Marvel-style drama. Verdict: 2.6/5. Worth it only if you want Halo gear wish-fulfillment inside Marvel and don’t mind messy prose and repetitive system dumps.

yes

The road map for this story was just like the original. Normal but train then after a major event/movie the augmentation then basic armor MK-1 and so forth until endgame with the infinity as the final reword.

Ya. The prompt for the rewrite was shit. the first version(the not AI one) is in the summary of you want to read that one 😁

read the summary. the first version is there with a download link. This version is rewritten with AI but with a sitter prompt. ¯⁠\⁠_⁠(⁠ツ⁠)⁠_⁠/⁠¯. V3 in the work. 😅🤣

Tks. It's just an experiment of mine. "It reads practically like a Chinese novel due to its poor writing" - ouch, but tks. Read the first draft :D

Stollen Work, Stollen Work, Stollen Work, Stollen Work, Stollen Work, https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1067443/an-iron-resolve-marveltime-travel/

Stollen Work, Stollen Work, Stollen Work, Stollen Work, Stollen Work, https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1067443/an-iron-resolve-marveltime-travel/

sorry but the story was translate up to chapter 530-ish. the beginning is good but after it get unto Wikia stuff and it ruins the story.