Wouldn't be good to let people to read like 20-30 chapters in order to see if they get hooked? I can't even read chapter 1 since it's asking me to pay, but while i like worldbuilding i'm not sure to spent 10 dolars for something i don't know if it's good enough, it may be different if i had read some of your work before but i didn't.

Are you telling me the author doesn't even know he should allow to read a couple of chapters to hook?

She is really too kind, she belived him and is even helping him this much without reason.

He said he was summoned, but he didn't say from where so even if she were to belive him (That she should not) it would be hard for her to understand he doesn't know magic and he didn't ask so is nor really the moment to explain that.

The bandits kidnapped him and danced in front of the sliming puting others at risk and still decided to forgive them, saved them and even then recruit them despite his own party objetions and the damage on the soldiers moral and loyalty, which means the risk of having those outweighed the advantages too.

And yet, Lucas could see him with no trouble.

Prolly in the same way Junior ended being the highest level on the team despite her sickness and not being in front while she have to be more careful of when using magic.

It's a serpent, not a vampire. Don't go killing and reviving the serpent just like that. Plus, why the wyvern care about human favor? Also. Humands can't breed with monkeys why could with dragons? one thing is to go and make elves and dwards who at least looks like, but dragons is an other thing. Maybe, droping a drop of blood on a person to give them dragon like powers and stuff is fine, but isn't going too much a child? Is the author making a excuse to why could be useful to bring the duchess with ash when he previously said it was too much of a problem? For that he should just have keep the marriage thing even if saving the merchant guild. I'm starting to think Ash is responsable for the future where the duchy and the alien gods to destroy the empire.

Considering he decided to not accept empire influence and even reject the other kingdom marriage union even thought the second thing wasn't directly related with the empire or the other kingdom influence while even trying to reclute the most wanted duchesse who is paramont to end a war it doesn't really seems like he care about the other kingdom much thought.

Interesting idea, but also means that it would be easy to raise multielemental mages for your war making them not so rare.

But he turned a blind eye to the bandids after their second error.

Still, no matter how powerful is far-sight the user is a cleric rank N, so low stats and often bad stat oriented. He's cheat is made to be use of afar and guarded, but him being slow and weaker than a normal archer/gunman when precision is not the issue even with two weapons, but they can't close the difference? Lucas even have a skill for movement even that should be good enough to reach him before Damian could point to him...

To be honest. Considering the state comes from blackqueen is weird it wasn't the first weapon he used. But since author is a softy i guess isn't that strange.

Says the guy who is looking for levl 50 and late game stuff at first year. It could be balance?

Too naive. They may have killed on the spot or she may spare only one as vengance. Her country is mostly finished. It would only continue the bloodbath some more if it were come to said. At most it could cause the other countries to be more aware, but would that really help her in any form? Also, the elf race is in the empire. If they were to talk and cause tension i'm sure the emperor would kill all their elves. I don't get the protagonist any more.

Again Ash said this was bad idea because it cause desertion but still went with it in the shadows? Even if he was giving some autonomy hiding such target is too much. A few members is one thing, but the wanted duchess is a whole diferent thing, let alone offer to help them. The empire may even attack him and there could never be trust with here. Not to mention that for someone who doesn't wand anyone to die this badly sending them of all people is close to asking them to suicide. Also there is still empire soldiers at home. At least he should have waited until later.

The empire with all resources have been looking for her everywhere but those 3 found it in a month alone?

Wait, did he really sent THEM for that? And even after saying how to get involved with her was bad...

Noo, i wanted to ship her with the protagonist. Also it was fine for her to open to other races, but it got this bad for saving her once even thought what happened in her childhood? Sigh

And what about the impact of what you did for those in your hundreds of heroes and soldiers? The most important person almost throwing his life for bandinds conscripted who didn't give his best and put others at risk while they were bleeding and sweating to dead? Is fine to save your people, but for him the one and for them. I would wonder why do i'm following some suicide like him and maybe feel like my effort is being wasted on him. Also, taking in account that so many invations have come and there had been little damage i may even consider like the monster are not much of a threat and someone else would easily. MC is being way way too soft.