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RubyKing

RubyKing

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Don't Look Now, I'm Being Followed, Act Normal

2017-10-07 JoinedBrazil
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing1yr
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    I'm Totally in love with this book. I added it to my library!!! I hope you continue writing it. Keep up the good work and keep updating [img=recommend]

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    Celestial Bloodline
    Fantasy · _Orange_
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing1yr
    Posted

    I found it interesting! but the paragraphs are way too long hahaaha it ends up tiring Try to break them, no need to rewrite them. just split those long paragraphs into 3 or 4 small ones

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    Alaafin: Irunmole
    Fantasy · Atedangai
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing1yr
    Posted

    OK, I know where this is going! And I feel like I'm going to cry hahahahahaha let's see if it really happens Anyway, I liked the beginning! direct to the point

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    Till death separates us
    Urban · Lindsy_newton
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing1yr
    Posted

    The story is interesting; I liked it! My only criticism is that even though the chapters are tiny, the paragraphs are large, tiring the reading a little. It would be good to break them up a little, making them easier to read.

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    The Fantastic Five.
    Teen · Prajnya Shriyan
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing1yr
    Posted

    I really love regression stories. even though this isn't our "usual" regression story, it still got me excited. I can't wait for the next chapters

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    I pretend
    Fantasy · Thephantomdreamer
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing1yr
    Commented

    GooooD

    Ch 2 ¿Regressor?
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    I pretend
    Fantasy · Thephantomdreamer
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing1yr
    Posted

    Like any good author without shame, I'm going to review my own book kkkkk I had started writing this book on another account a LONG time ago, just the beginning, but I deleted it! Wuel.. This book is my private world; I always think about it when I go to sleep or when I'm bored. This book started when I had to design a Visual ID as a TCC. (TCC is a course conclusion project that the graduates need to finish at the end of college, I don't know what it's called in other countries, hahaha) For this project, I created a fictional game and had to make the game's background. That's when the embryo of this world began to be born, and I started to think about this world a little bit every day, even after finishing the project. I'm not saying all this for you to think it's good, hahaha; it's just to let you know that it was my private world for a long time. Before, I tried to share it, but I deleted it because I wasn't comfortable. Now I want to try sharing it again. It might go bad, but I hope you enjoy the journey.

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    I Don't Wanna Be a Hero
    Fantasy · RubyKing
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing1yr
    Commented
    The parrot stopped at the side and flapped its wings as it cried, "Cuckold! Cuckold!"
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    Civilization: Beyond Two Worlds
    Fantasy · His Majesty Scholar
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing2yr
    Commented

    "Su Changqing arrived in front of the reclining Zhou Emperor and ..." You guys know the rest.......

    Su Changqing arrived in front of the reclining Zhou Emperor and bowed. He had always been able to constantly correct his position, never growing too arrogant because of the Emperor's favor. This was where he was smart compared to the others.
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    My Wife Is A General Who Killed Tens Of Thousands On The Battlefield
    Eastern · My Daughter is too Cute
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing2yr
    Commented

    If there's something that I hate it's these MCs who get stoic and expressionless. For me its just reflects the author's inability to describe reactions without making the MC look like a virgin or pervert.

    With just one glance, a thousand thoughts already ran through his head, but his expression did not show it at all.
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    Tavern in Another Dimension:Getting the Elf Queen Drunk at the Start
    Fantasy · 45 Degrees North-East
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing2yr
    Commented

    Well, here in Brazil hospitals and school are free But it's the government, I don't know how a private institution would achieve that, but it doesn't seem so impossible

    "We the Hanley group of industries… are opening multiple schools and hospitals throughout the country… and within a few months, the construction will be completed. And once the construction is completed… they will provide free services."
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    Marvel: Starting from the Bottom
    Movies · ToothlessS
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing2yr
    Commented

    that was what she said!!!!

    She looked back at me as she said the next words. "So thank you for making something like this happen. Thank you, and please do not stop"
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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
    Games · Adui
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing2yr
    Commented

    if this is "between the lines", bruh....

    Between the lines, he did not hide his contempt and belittlement for Raymond.
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    The Entire Mankind is Acting As Me, I Shall Secretly Build a Battleship and Shock the World
    Urban · Two Langya Brothers
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing3yr
    Commented

    Is she impulsive? it seems to me that he is the impulsive here. helping people is cool, but you must be in a financial situation that allows you to help. She's totally right to be angry

    "Your mom wants me to ask for that 10,000 yuan back for the renovation of our hotpot restaurant. If I fail to get it, she won't come back. She's now at your granny's house." Father Chen rubbed his face, then he squatted and scratched his head. 'I just transferred the amount to him. How can I get it back? Xiangyun is a bit too impulsive.' 
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    I Don’t Want To Be Popular
    Urban · Vermillion Bird’s Solo Flight
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  • RubyKing
    RubyKing3yr
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    Writing Web Novels In America
    Urban · Writing To Quit Smoking
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