You need to get a beta reader to fix a bunch of mistyped names and errors in your story. That said, the quality of the story itself is alright if you exclude those obvious errors and the pace is nice too.

I think when you say Ekans you mean Seviper. Ekans is the kanto snake, seviper is the one found in hoenn, and it's also the one known to have that rivalry with zangoose you mention.

we need moreeeeeee Come back with more updates please!

Thank god I hope this one keeps getting updated, got sad when the other one stopped updating...

One of the best pokemon fanfics out there so far. I put it on the same level as Journey Towards Greatness before that one turned into a 50% badly written smut fic... Hope the author keeps up the updates and the quality!

are these chapters going to get fixed sometime?

using squared units for a measurement of space does not really make sense... cubic is the unit used for volume, which is also the way we usually measure space...

No problem dear author. So long as you are not actually dropping the story and keep uploading on a semi-regular basis (i can even accept once a month if it gets to that point) then it's all good to me. Great story so far so just try to keep it up and not rush into things.

I will only say that if you are paying them for this they're not deserving the money. Your own writing was much better and I think I speak for all us readers when we say the quality has been dropping. I will still keep reading it for the plot but am now honestly looking forward to volume 3 more than the rest of these chapters xd

Soooooo, no chapters have been posted for over 2 weeks by now. I do so hope you will bring us some more content again at some point...

the sword was used to seal someone into an illusion of eternal drunken slumber in the wine gourd right? So make the test related to alcohol & illusion somehow. tests of willpower are always a safe bet for this kinda stuff as well x)

Doing great with the chapters, hope you keep it up! This is already in my top 5 lifetime favorite pokemon fanfics by now and you've barely started.

Loving your story so far! The amount of updates is very satisfying. Especially when compared to the average on this site. Your writing quality is completely fine too. I haven't caught you out on too many grammar mistakes yet. Story development is slow paced, but I applaud you for that and am personally just hoping that you stick with this story to work out everything I like to imagine you have running in your head for this. Character design is still not completely fleshed out, but that can be contributed to the slow story development as well. I'm hoping this will be improved at some point in the story though. Don't fall for the trap of 'writing an adventure' without building the characters going on said adventure first. That would hurt the amazing story you're writing so far. World background basically the same advice as character design. It's not an issue, but don't forget about it. Would definitely want to learn more details about the exact world you're creating here. It's already a bit more impressive because of the infodumps you made in earlier chapters with the whole examination thing and all, but there's always more to a world than you can explain in a single chapter so keep improving the image to really bring it to life. Ignore all the haters giving bad reviews & the kids asking for timeskips or whatever. Your story is doing great and I hope you keep the slow build & update speed instead.

Still you should have poliwhirl for option A if you want it to be correct. Right now it's A water > water, B grass/poison > grass/poison C grass/poison > grass/poison and D bug/poison > bug/poison

Just pointing out for you that it's spelled 'lightning', not 'lightening'. If you add the 'e' it means to make something lighter, or make it weigh less. lightning as in thunder is spelled without the e. Just pointing it out now since i figure this character will be mentioned more often in the future and having it spelled wrong like 10 times in a chapter could get bothersome for some readers:p

Try not to overuse the word 'well' in your sentences when writing. Just a piece of advice to make your story flow better, keep up the good work though! Loving the story so far.

After organizing his thoughts he went to bed to sleep. In his dream, he dreamt of pokemon appearing in our world.

At first, he did not want to see Galarian Farfetch'd in Ash's team but with this episode, he started to like it. He is impatient to see Sirfetch'd in the anime now. Also, in his opinion, in the next few episodes, Galarian Farfetch'd should evolve into Sirfetch'd. I'm just going to go through each line and try to fix all your grammar & spelling mistakes in case you want to take the time to adjust it. I like the story but prefer reading with 100% correct English.