Anyone with brain would notice something wrong with his strength and the snowstorm.

The writing is poor in sophistication. English grammar is very basic. The story is quite bland (He did this and he do that kind). I decide to drop after 20 chapters of no-excitement.

what happened with the release rate?

You let him jump to lv300 that is totally wrong.

This part is too long. You don't need to reveal everything to explain The Demugen action. Keeping the mysteries will make thing more interesting.

The heart should pump blood into arteries. Will there be problem if blood turn back through the veins?

4x40000 +2x20000? you can give him as much as you want. But be careful with the calculation.

great story, great writing, some math cliche i think

be more careful with math and logic

But his stick kill Lv9 player!!?? So unreasonable.

The narrative is so beautiful and not boring. But I would like some claity, like what is his purpose? Is it MC who drive truck, flew out, and sleep on the road? Because the name is omitted in many places.

He must be P2W God with loads of gold.

Well, two months pass by and I don't see anything interesting. This is just description of someone life.

I don't think he read the contract when "He signed it immediately". She can lend him some shark loan with very high debt.

The story didn't go anywhere to get some comment.

I'd recommend skipping to "God of Trickster" from the same author but so much better. This book is like an experimental one, leveling, skill set, fighting style keep changing from RPG to eastern fighting to etc. as author testing new idea. Characters are very bland and simple mind. Gacha system is too overpowered s that the thrill is very low.