ParkBung

Love everything in this book, esp. when the scenarios contain a tinge of detective challenge.

Anyone with brain would notice something wrong with his strength and the snowstorm.

The writing is poor in sophistication. English grammar is very basic. The story is quite bland (He did this and he do that kind). I decide to drop after 20 chapters of no-excitement.

what happened with the release rate?

You let him jump to lv300 that is totally wrong.

This part is too long. You don't need to reveal everything to explain The Demugen action. Keeping the mysteries will make thing more interesting.

The heart should pump blood into arteries. Will there be problem if blood turn back through the veins?

4x40000 +2x20000? you can give him as much as you want. But be careful with the calculation.

great story, great writing, some math cliche i think

be more careful with math and logic