It was not just one war. It was the war 500 years ago she lost her sister. Either during that war or shortly after it ended and she was away just returning the former head priestess died. After that theWatasumi god Orobashi attacked and she killed it causing Watasumi to fight against the shogunate which resulted in the Tengu death and finally, the Oni girl never died but the corruption she got from being swallowed by one of the corrupt 'gods?' which she ripped from the inside out had corrupted her years later causing her to go insane and attack Ei which she cut off her arm before the oni fled. so she is still alive if the MC can find her and heal her then maybe she could talk some sense into Ei. It would also bring back the Red Oni tribe back into the army as they locked themselves away out of embarrassment and guilt as her son was to ashamed to face the Raiden after his mother's 'betrayal'.

All he has to do is learn concurrent chanting for those chants and also learn how to be proficient in magic and he can shorten the chant but it won't be as powerful. The spell slots don't work as you describe them. Everyone has 3 slots however just like skills whether you develop any magic is put to heritage, aptitude, and/or luck. Grimores however bypass this and can add on to the number of slots if the grimore is powerful enough. Bell's grimoire that he read could be one of those but we will never know because he has no aptitude for magic.

On not out* (this is for those who haven't cultivated enough to autocorrect beginner stuff like this. To be considered a grandmaster you must autocorrect MTL stuff and entire sentences misspelled be warned after doing this your writing skills will more than likely get worse)

Einlion is trash. The first story he wrote was decent then it became trash like 30 chapters in with a forced plot, plot holes, bland MC, and awful romance. I and several others wrote reviews about how bad it was and they got deleted and the author was a whining B about all the constructive criticisms and his army of s*** that were paying like $100 a month on Patreon for generic writing with lots of lemons. I'm glad none of his stories are popular anymore

This takes place earlier than in canon so hopefully, it gets solved before the Traveler gets here. I hate how most of the issues in Teyvat have to be fixed by the traveler and not its own citizens

Thanks for the chapter. I haven't commented much, but I love the way you flesh out the characters and their interactions. How well you describe Ei and her own ways and why she thinks the way she does.

Yeah I gave this 5 chapters but it's not that good and falls flat so I'm going to drop it here

Spells are if you get one that basically buff you or it creates a coat/armor around you like Ais, Alfia, some of the spells from Astrea familia.

In danmachi they kinda are I mean the universe caps at city level at max which means someone around special grade can probably be equivalent to someone part of the Zeus or Hera familia in their prime. Someone like Sakuna or Gojo would probably be able to solo the entire Orario city alone

Or you could train as a smith and use it to smite enemies or even create a giant furnace where you literally turn your enemies into a weapon or something while in the dungeon. Creativity is something people seem to lack when it comes to danmachi fanfics its either Bell SI, Bell reimagined, or some excuse to join the Hestia familia

Plans to be like every other lackluster danmachi fic and join the original MC familia instead of joining another something more unique or creating your own goddess/god and having him join them instead. F

Actually, you can leave a portion of the beast's chakra inside or it leaves and gives you a portion of its chakra and the host will be fine it's only when a complete extraction does the host die. This is shown with Killer Bee absorbs one of the cut tails from the Hachibi after Madara yanked him out of Bee.

He is generic and boring with a plain design and focuses on Japanese having a little boy complex as an MC because they are 'cute' and 'innocent'.

Shut up dude

Okay who said anything about him going to the abyss? I said he interacts with the abyss meaning the forces not the abyss itself. You never did say she was but the moment you confirmed that she is the traveler it's practically guaranteed at this point. I never said he wouldn't interact with the evil twin I said it would be more interesting if an author that wanted their MC to interact with Lumine would actually choose to interact with evil Lumine instead of the typical protagonist Lumine.

That is never the problem in many fics most have their own story while she has hers. The main problem is every novel and it seems yours included in this now just have Lumine because you want to add her to the MCs every growing harem collection and in order to do that you go with her as the traveler instead of abyss which would be way more interesting especially if he wanted to learn about the curse and everything. It’s 2 birds with 1 stone as they say. Sorry about my rant I will still read your story as it is quite well written with a few plot holes here and there but it is my favorite Genshin fic out all the ones I read.

Yeah I mean that is true both travelers are bland but I just tired of seeing Lumine this and Lumine that in nearly every single fanfic where the MC is an OC male. Like they could try to go for an evilish Lumine but they just go for the easy road.

Please Author of you read this be different from 99% of the fanfics out there and don’t put Lumine as the travelor. I don’t ask for much just this. I get tired of every story having the same Travelor with a somewhat bland personality

How come he hasn't seen Makato's soul yet? A portion of her soul is sealed inside the sword.

Was stated. When the last the archons were compared it was 500 years ago before Ei was Archon and when she was significantly weaker. She has grown stronger. Not saying he still isn't the strongest but the statement is old