Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

The conclusion is too fast and too easy. Jack should toyed both of them before killing them off. Just like how they toyed their victims before killing them off.

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Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

Great story! Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter! The story is good but too fast-paced imo. A break is needed between one sequence to another. The concept is good and I can't wait for more!!!

Thanks for the chapter Glad to have you back!

Author should decide if you want to write in 3rd person or 1st person!

Man...Can't get enough of this good story!!! I can't wait to read the cops POV chapter!! Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter 🤘

good chapter!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter !

I think it would be better if you use [bold] for the text instead of '.