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Makes absolutely no sense.
Nothing to do with my point at all...
Right when i thought the grammar will kill me, i read this sh*t...switching from numbers to letters with 0 explanation. If F-rank is broken, go F yourself.
The sentence structures and grammar are really giving me cancer...i'll most likely drop this just because of that.
Hair* is already plural
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With A* guard...
He's wearing a dress? FYI, that was sarcasm.
You know that overusing the word "tsundere" is making the MC and the story just look more r*tarded?
How were the 1st 5 chapters perfectly fine? Now i'm getting a headache multiple times a paragraph...will i ever get to c7???
Makes no sense, just write girl...it's like writing "this ice cream costs (-)-1 dollars". Also, what's with the initial caps in the middle of sentences? And you're starting to forget letters: Grace Smit...h? What's happening in this chapter??
Then why write an awkward thing like "raider values"?
I mean, what happened? Chapters 1-5 were great with grammar and then chapter 6 took a nosedive...
Yeah, even with "normal" eyesight i'd want to kill myself.
Which would be little considering it's lvl4 and it was said the max a mortal has ever reached is lvl8...anyway, exploring this kind of skills to lvl100 would be boring af.
That's an interesting sentence...