Story_hunter
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hunter of great stories. seekers of ideas and secrets
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Story_hunter3yrCommentedcould use partial rewrite Starting at " fridayman ( dual use of alright)
"It's the enemy landbound mechs that pose the greatest threat to the Valkyrie Redeemer." Ves stated as he studied the projection of the incomplete design. "Fridayman mechs that aren't designed to fly aren't burdened with cumbersome flight systems. Their offense and defense is always considerably better than mechs with wings. Its a really poor idea to pit a hawk against a wolf."- Story_hunter3yrCommented
"there be monsters'
Doom Guards started showing up by the dozens, then the hundreds, then the thousands! - Story_hunter3yrCommented
well mastery's for the win
"The Ouroboros is one of the most admired mechs of its kind in the galactic center." She spoke as her eyes glinted at its magnificent shape. The mech not only exuded power, but also an exceptional vibe that was not much different from a glow! "The Serpent of Creation and Destruction has confounded every mech designer who were fortunate enough to witness it in the flesh. Despite its rather humble beginnings and its continuous upgrades, the essence of the mech still remains the same. In fact, it has grown stronger!"