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DerpZerke3hCommentedit depends on how well you can balance and make characters relevant even when not a focus for 10+ chapters at minimum. Since new arcs mean set up time and planning, that will be long enough for characters to fall out of focus. Also, it depends on how well you do coordinated romance. In other words, no harem is easier to accomplish but requires a higher level of individual depth. Harem is harder to make good but means that you don't have to make the same level of depth to all of the characters.
At the moment readers are voting on patre on whether the novel should be Harem or not, this vote is open to everyone, so you can go to: patre on.com/NunuXD and vote too, as well as giving your opinion.- DerpZerke10dReplied to DerpZerke
Nevermind. Fetal is American English, while foetal is British English.
Efe had brought the biggest out of all them, and Alex had given her a good ear-bashing for all the wonton spending and the extravagance of the stuff she'd purchased. The poor girl curled up into a foetal position and begged for forgiveness over and over again on the floor before Alex finally let up. The older girl then picked up the entire pile of clothes, shoes and jewellery and tossed them into the storeroom, while banning Efe from wearing any of them and from any desserts for a week as punishment. - DerpZerke10dCommented
fetal position*
Efe had brought the biggest out of all them, and Alex had given her a good ear-bashing for all the wonton spending and the extravagance of the stuff she'd purchased. The poor girl curled up into a foetal position and begged for forgiveness over and over again on the floor before Alex finally let up. The older girl then picked up the entire pile of clothes, shoes and jewellery and tossed them into the storeroom, while banning Efe from wearing any of them and from any desserts for a week as punishment. - DerpZerke1mthCommented
it clicked in my mind The dark dimension is what the ancient one is drawing power from but also defending against. Any new source of dark dimension energy should instantly set the ancient one into a panic because that's a new connection for dormammu to exploit.
Ch 12 The upcoming Massacre - DerpZerke1mthCommented
honestly expected this to be a dual cultivation technique
Di Class's low-ranked Dou Technique, Duel of Nourishing Spirits - DerpZerke1mthCommented
A fire red one! I hope it's charzard themed. Like design wise, not color scheme.
Five storage rings, including a fire red intermediate storage ring, the others were all low grade storage rings. - DerpZerke1mthReplied to DerpZerke
Also, they are heavily related to nightmares.
"Going on, this dungeon is called [Sea of Demons], where water-demon monsters will be appearing. There are two floors; the first one, where you'll obviously start, is full of ground monsters, like Drudes and Lycanthropes. The most dangerous part of this first floor is the boss, which is none other than a Succubus."detailI'm A Little Extra, But Why Are The Villainesses So Obsessed With Me?!Others · ItsJustANightmare - DerpZerke1mthReplied to SkillsMasterAkurai
A drude is a malevolent spirit, more commonly called a witch. It is German in origin.
"Going on, this dungeon is called [Sea of Demons], where water-demon monsters will be appearing. There are two floors; the first one, where you'll obviously start, is full of ground monsters, like Drudes and Lycanthropes. The most dangerous part of this first floor is the boss, which is none other than a Succubus."detailI'm A Little Extra, But Why Are The Villainesses So Obsessed With Me?!Others · ItsJustANightmare - DerpZerke1mthReplied to AspiringPedo
Here in Iowa, at some sporting goods, I can get a hunting rifle with no ID needed. Or the better option is you can buy 100+ lbs (45+ kg) draw weight bows that can pierce car doors. Even Walmart carries bows and arrows.
While I was getting stuff I did grab a simple pump shotgun, a high-power revolver said to be able to put down bears, a lot of ammo, a couple of compound bows, crossbows, and plenty of arrows/bolts for them while also picking up a bundle of javelins at the Track and Field side of the store. - DerpZerke1mthCommentedCh 11 The Transformed Iron Demon Armor
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Does that mean that 'boss' will also enter his care eventually?!
"It's like this. You're the number one person in the Eldritch pantheon, and a lot of them want you to take care of them when they're off duty. Normally, they go to sleep and wait for their next assignments. But now you're here. Everyone wants to be under your care at least once." - DerpZerke1mthCommented
I am derpy. I was granted the title derpy when I was 3 and have used it as my main name for the last 22 years.
So, crazy voices. It seems Yor has told me guys are not just voices of my imagination. Care to introduce yourself? No? Silent still? Alright, I can't do anything about it. - DerpZerke1mthCommentedCh 73 Palace of Reincarnated, Insight into Reincarnation
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ah, yasuo vs braum
"FACING HIM, ARAKI STANDING AT 1.95 METERS TALL WITH THE TITLE SHIELD, 8 WINS 0 DEFEATS THE UNBREAKABLE SHIELD, WILL HE STILL HOLD THIS TITLE AGAINST YASUO'S POISON, LET'S FIND OUT!!!" - DerpZerke1mthCommented
Nice, an author who realizes that I haven't and don't plan to read the synopsis or look at the tags. I am here because of the title and the picture.
A/N: Quick note, before anyone says anything even though I've already said it in the synopsis, this fic is inspired by "Eye System in RWBY". - DerpZerke2mthCommented
Does this mean he will now become a loli?
[Congratulations! You got Tatsumaki Template from One Punch Man universe. Talk about being lucky.] - DerpZerke2mthCommentedCh 55 Chapter 54: Friend That Is Always There.
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My mind will only ever go to the infinity gems from "Mr. Infinity", where he made the original 7 gems and all other universes beside his got the normal 6 stones.
Andy doesn't know if he needs to swallow the Tesseract to obtain it's abilities or just let the symbiote posses it, hoping that the space gem is a part of the Goddess Nemesis' body and he didn't need to devour it even though all of the infinity stones in the unverse is only a copy of the original infinity stones. - DerpZerke2mthCommented
Agreed, morale is good, and morals suck.
With Robin, I could steal 1 dollar from every bank account on the planet, or empty out some CEO tax evaders hidden stash without them even knowing it. I just didn't do it because I still have morale. - DerpZerke2mthCommented
That just makes me think he basically rolled a 10 on a d100 rarity check for this tier.
(A/N You should have seen the rest of the items on that list before you say things like that Bub)