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kamkam5mthCommentedThis is the bad thing about inexperienced Writers, a story needs a flow point A lead to Point B, he just came into a Random world he knows nothing about, he has no money no real power, he's basically in the begenning of his " hero's journey " and now he's going to create a school and take care of it's students out of no where ? This make no narrative sense whatsoever
Ch 32 Chapter 32 Meetings and Reveals- kamkam5mthCommented
this is painful to read
" Oh yes, I can do this." And showed them I could move ears, and move the bones in my hand. (both things I can do, and also some others.) - kamkam5mthCommented
The edge is too strong with this one
This book has been deleted. - kamkam5mthCommented
Please don't add Mecha the Story and powers are already way to bloated add Mechas to this is just going to ruin it ....
"I didn't even notice until after we took it. The schematics for Atlas's latest Mechs and weaponry. I heard this shit was stolen months ago, I didn't think it'd end up in her hands. Do you have any idea what the Atlas Military will do when they find out someone has this?" - kamkam5mthCommented
He's really acting like a child ...
Regardless, I only had one response for emotional blackmail. "Fuck off." - kamkam5mthCommented
A NEW HAND TOUCHES THE BEACON !!!
He just shrugged, I guess it wasn't his job to dissuade people from taking jobs. "He also left this." He flipped his hand over and I could tell he pulled on his own personal 'space' to pull out an object. It was a crystal-life object, spherical in nature with many flat sides. "He said it was a 'key', not explaining anything else. Oh, and before I forget, the materials for the enchanting job, which will be deducted from your earnings when you return." He handed me a small bag. - kamkam5mthCommentedCh 34 Level Up #34
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FFS sake It's always the same thing with every Author going for the most boring brain dead options ...
'Yeah... I'll just go with the safe option then...' I sighed as I made my decision and selected the Mad Scientist archetype. - kamkam5mthCommented
This sentence is hurting my brain ....It's like you're not even trying mate
But this powerful senator like a 'Non-stick pan', was not going to get his reputation to receive any 'stains'. - kamkam2yrCommented
And a gunner can ? -.-
Nikolai had no plans to be a mage now, as that would require a tremendous number of resources, and it would also leave him vulnerable to physical attacks. Furthermore, mages couldn't survive without a party. Most of his plans were to be alone. - kamkam2yrReplied to PLAINWATER
This comment killed me x))
"W-what!? No! I just want to hire maids." - kamkam2yrCommented
Ain't that convenient
Boy, you are lucky if not for them not wanting to reveal their cards before the tournament you would not be walking home today." - kamkam2yrReplied to Kaihwa
Yeah u just chew it
Descending the stairs of School I remembered that a bunch of delinquents liked to spend their time behind the School Gym smoking, eating tobacco while doing weird and stupid stuff.