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Lots of inconsistencies. Idea is great but very poorly executed.

MC name is Roy in Naruto settings. This shows amount of effort put in MC

If Naruto is in academy then how is Rasa dead? Rasa was killed while travelling for chunin exam which is months after graduation.

Thanks

raw title?

If this is translation please post original raw. And please maintain consistency of name at least.

Can you name the Raw title

You have copied this from other novel. Word by word. And passing as your own.

I have read whole plot. There is nothing special about this fanfic. Totally waste of time.

There is almost total lack of any logical thinking in characters. From MC to even HP characters lack common sense. Translator has just removed some MTL effects but not much superior to MTL. Dishonesty on author's part is so clear that only positive reviews are shown on novel dashboard due to author deleting other reviews.