Hi Molly, i googled your competition and found no results... Molly are you lying to me. I guess the only Molly i can trust, is the pills.

A very good novel to pick up, Although there are a few grammar mistakes, i'm willing to look past that since english hard. The novel grabs your attention from chapter 1 and keeps you engaged all the way through but most importantly, this novel is home to the legendary Patrick. A man so legendary that his name will be passed down for centuries to come. As much as i would love to go on a essay long rant on the mega-chadliness that only makes up a fraction of Patrick's godly appeal. I feel it more important to bring up that this novel is a hidden gem that only gets better as you go on, even if it's partly due to Patrick.

Even if i wanted to live, i wouldn't go with you.

Shut up Patrick, whats that name even mean anyway. Pa-Trick. did your dad do a trick and vanish, same here. I guess we have a lot more in common then i thought. Maybe you aren't so bad after all. Just kidding, what would i have in common with a filthy rat like you.

What the flying f*ck, Patrick's parents gave birth to him, a literal rat and decided they would bless the world with two more of him. This is why the modern world is going to sh*t.

Oh, this waste of my imagination actually has a redeeming quality. I guess even cow sh*t can be used as a fertilizer.

One of these things is not like the other, one of these things just doesn't belong. And it was f*cking Patrick.

Ah, a relatable protagonist.

Couldn't have said it better myself.

Good chapter. Am i allowed to do a shameless plug, probably not but then again screw soceity and its endless fixation on what is deemed morally right. If you want to join my rebellion on the oppressive modern society read my book Day-Break.

Thanks, feel free to criticize any chapters you have a problem with and i’ll do my best to fix them.

Thanks for being the first comment, how are you liking the story so far.

Author here, felt like patting myself on the back with 5 shiny stars. Self love is all the rage these days. I want all of my readers to love themselves like i do. Also love my book, its good... I think.