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    Sanity2yr
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    Just had to re-read some previous points but from what you typed, Gustav got the system upgrade feature about 4/5 days ago starting from after he got shot with the energy on the ship. From there 1 night passed and the next day was the knowledge exchange and 2nd day was the fight the 3rd day I believe they returned home so even if it wasn't done upgrading, it would be way more than 34%. Another thing was the system activated to steal Zim's bloodline but it didn't active to take the worm bloodline? And then of course he waited an additional 2 days for it to upgrade? You could probably just change the days required for the upgrade since it isn't a major thing but the bloodline absortion thing seems kinda big. If i'm wrong about this sorry but good story nonetheless :)

    Ch 128 System Upgrade Complete
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    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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    Sanity3yr
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    I may be late to this story but so far it has been amazing apart from certain points, but this plot-convenience of trying to keep side characters relevant without any real build up will tire fast IF used repeatedly. I can only hope that future chapters don't introduce more side characters, that get deus-ex-machina every time you want to keep them for further use...

    Ch 456 A Reckless Plan(2)
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    World Domination System
    Fantasy · KillerHemboy
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