Oh, such a classic phrase in Chinese webnovels. Lol, I remember when this was EVERYWHERE! Makes me think of some other phrases like “didn’t know whether to laugh or cry” that used to be everywhere too 😂.

Ao Man

Love this name!! 😂

Might be Tribulation stage

The cabbage merchant from Avatar the Last Airbender 😂

I wonder what would happen if someone were cultivating on Mars. Would they be gathering the qi of Heaven and Mars? 😂

I first met him years after all this had happened. While i wouldn’t say he’s ok after everything that happened, he’s doing much better at least. Managed to do some under the table work and get money, while sleeping next to the train tracks. Once he was able to get a somewhat stable income with that under the table stuff, he was able to get a cheap gym membership which he used mainly so he had a place to get a shower. Eventually (years later) he was able to convince someone to take up his case in court and force his parents to give him his papers

You’ll be kicked out as soon as the law allows them to. Friend of mine got kicked out as soon as he turned 18, even though he hadnt graduated high school yet. Parents wouldn’t let him take any important papers (birth certificate, state ID) or give him any money either. He only had his school ID, the clothes on his back and whatever he could fit into his school bag. …. He ended up sleeping next to the train tracks for years because no one would hire him without documentation proving he was a citizen and legally allowed to work, and he couldnt get a place to stay for the same reason even when he got soare change from people passing him by on the street. So yeah, not a good thing

Whats TLM?

Considering I’m not the only person to have commented on the author’s need to correct their grammar, and the multitudes of people who keep liking all of the comments I made doing so, it’s pretty clear a LOT of people care. The worse a story’s grammar gets, the worse the story becomes. You could have a great idea, plot, pacing, and characters, but the quality of your story will be lowered if you have bad grammar. Not as many people will read it as compared to the many more that would if you did have it

Its ok, None of yall are humans anymore anyway 🤣

“Is he still human?!” Lol, no. He’s a Motorbot

Honestly it's very conditional. Straight up one-on-one fist fight Black Panther would win. If it was a "fight for your life", no-holds-barred thing and the MC had time to prepare then M'Khokeli would win hands down. ....after he's gotten stronger of course. M'Khokeli won't be beating up T'Challa when he's 6 and the other is in his 20's. This won't be one of the nonsensical fanfics where a kid gets OP powers and then beats everyone up. Even Ash Ketchum was 10 years old before he could become a pokemon trainer and beat people up for their money (i.e. pokemon battles), lol

Main Character's goal: Stop the doomsday prophecy from being realized. As far as how strong he'll be compared to Black Panther....I want to tell you, i really do. That would be giving away major spoilers though

Hard to say. I kinda have writer's paralysis with this work. Basically, a worse form of writer's block

The dialogue in this book is pretty awkward. No one talks the way they have. Also, the word "females" and "males" aren't used in everyday vocabulary. Those are usually used when you're in a conversation that has some kind of scientific theme going on. Ex: A scientist says "The female gorilla has been exhibiting symptoms that the male gorillas have not. Further testing is required." Does this story need further editing or something? No offense intended, by the way

You're welcome, glad you liked it!

Ok, if you don't mind the fact that I'm going to lump "DC" with a bunch of other categories like Batman, Batman Beyond, Justice League, Teen Titans, Young Justice, etc

What about the mosquito, bro? It's the only enemy Saitama as never able to beat 😂

Thank you! It means a lot that you liked my work, in all honesty. I got hit by 2020 kinda badly and I don't have as much time to write nowadays, unfortunately. I used to be able to juggle writing my own unique book, 2 fanfictions, work and college. Now, however, I'm just doing my best to survive by working overtime at work and am barely able to put in any hours for my own unique story. I'm hoping that will change in 2021, so here's hoping! 😊