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KuroArtemis

KuroArtemis

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Just another normal working person

2017-07-09 JoinedIndia
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis1d
    Replied to America_Yea

    Author at least gave viable solution to it claiming his chakra was being automatically used by his body, But Haki Training and cultivation thing doesn't make sense. Imagine Boa hancock and ladies from Amazon lily using sperm to strengthen their body to awaken haki. Haki is ambition and manifestation of will nothing to do with body being strong to awaken it. Aisa was innately born with it, koby despite being hundred times weaker than zoro in terms of training body, Awaken haki at Marineford. What Author is trying to do doesn't make sense.

    Ch 8 Chapter 8
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    Haki User in Naruto
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 11 Establishing the Gap
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    Beyond Blue: Ichijyou Ryuu
    Anime & Comics · saturrn
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis4d
    Commented

    Haki turned into cultivation technique. My journey of this novel ends Adios

    Ch 8 Chapter 8
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    Haki User in Naruto
    Anime & Comics · komega
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis10d
    Commented

    finally my persistence to keep this library is paid back

    Ch 10 Making Connections
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    Beyond Blue: Ichijyou Ryuu
    Anime & Comics · saturrn
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis1mth
    Replied to Caano_Booro

    Only be blues fan fic

    Ch 9 One Year Later
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    Beyond Blue: Ichijyou Ryuu
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis1mth
    Commented

    please do not drop this

    Ch -2 Author's Note
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    Beyond Blue: Ichijyou Ryuu
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis1mth
    Commented

    My gosh I laughed so hard reading those wrong lyrics 🤣🤣🤣🤣

    Ch 24 Green light for Harem
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    Tycoon Author
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2mth
    Commented

    The messed up dynamics are creating a good drama. Interesting to read

    Ch 194 Transfer (2)
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    Dream Training : The Champions
    Competitive Sports · Agis_Z99
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2mth
    Commented

    It felt novel at the beginning but it just lost its charm and it's getting too dark. just going through the motions now.

    Ch 122 Chapter 121 - Indigo League; Energy Booster
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    Pokemon: - The Journey of a Reincarnator
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2mth
    Commented

    I understand you want to write matches but as a reader there is little to very less character development of kazuki outside football. Pitch in some breather chapters to develop his character. interaction with fans, social media. Sponsored ads daily life. kazuki should not be football playing robot.

    Ch 191 Spain(3)
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    Dream Training : The Champions
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter but too much info dump. starting to lose interest now will come back to binge this after 50 odd chapters

    Ch 12 Seeing Skill Part 2
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    Reincarnated in the Katsuragi Family
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2mth
    Commented

    kazuki turned into Kieran

    Ch 172 Final FA
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    Dream Training : The Champions
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2mth
    Commented

    is he going to be that anti human like mc. everything in this world is against mc thing.

    Ch 10 Rebirth
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    Reincarnated in the Katsuragi Family
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2mth
    Commented

    What's the point of all those powers in dating sim like setting. His authorities are useless in seducing a woman.

    Ch 9 Spending Karma Points
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    Reincarnated in the Katsuragi Family
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter keep it up

    Ch 166 Last Match(2)
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    Dream Training : The Champions
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2mth
    Commented

    Keep up the good work. Nice writing good build up and drama.

    Ch 165 Last Match
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    Dream Training : The Champions
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis2mth
    Commented

    one reason i don't like system having consciousness. if it's not written well it just spoils mc

    Ch 24 Ch 24 : Choose your decision wisely
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    One Piece: Perverted Upgrade System
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis3mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter keep up the good work

    Ch 158 Teamwork
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    Dream Training : The Champions
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis3mth
    Commented

    Is this dropped ?

    Ch 20 Ch 20 : Meet Nami once again
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    One Piece: Pokemon Gacha System
    Anime & Comics · Rain_Sinner
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  • KuroArtemis
    KuroArtemis3mth
    Commented

    Nice

    Ch 152 Arsenal(2)
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    Dream Training : The Champions
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