When it started, it had a lot of potential, but then it becomes repetitive. And to be honest the more you read the more you feel like you are losing brain cells. This story could be so much more but the author is focused on face slapping scenes that don’t make any sense. If you want to enjoy this, you have to leave your brain in a safe space to read this without losing any braincells

Try to read without a brain, only way you can get through all this repeated dumbness. Its hard to read with a normal working brain

The more i read the more i feel a reduction in my intelligence.

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It is hard to read, mc has low iq. Worst part the story feels like the dairy of an old person whose life was uneventful. Now the part where the villain comes has zero energy, really feels like lazy writing. Cause why didnt the shadow take over the mcs sisters body instead? You don’t have to always tell us when the mc sleeps and eats. Focus on the plot. The slow build up will only make sense if you weren’t trying to make this fast paced.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon