AinzOG

I didn’t need to leave a review but the frustration i get from the sheer fact that something as simple as revealing a secret is scretched for so long it starts to become annoying. It took more than 50 just to find out the character was doctor south and even more chapters just to reveal she was the daughter of Mrs Olsen. Like why stretch it? The story is great but the build up to the reveals is trash. Because it keeps getting repetitive and the face slapping is just get out of hand and mostly unnecessary.

When it started, it had a lot of potential, but then it becomes repetitive. And to be honest the more you read the more you feel like you are losing brain cells. This story could be so much more but the author is focused on face slapping scenes that don’t make any sense. If you want to enjoy this, you have to leave your brain in a safe space to read this without losing any braincells

Try to read without a brain, only way you can get through all this repeated dumbness. Its hard to read with a normal working brain

The more i read the more i feel a reduction in my intelligence.

Very

It is hard to read, mc has low iq. Worst part the story feels like the dairy of an old person whose life was uneventful. Now the part where the villain comes has zero energy, really feels like lazy writing. Cause why didnt the shadow take over the mcs sisters body instead? You don’t have to always tell us when the mc sleeps and eats. Focus on the plot. The slow build up will only make sense if you weren’t trying to make this fast paced.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon