Good to slightly more bad. He is too boring now. More family or relationship would flash out the novel and the mc.

+1

Amazing!! Thank you for the chapter.

How shonen! Having a skill level breakthrough during fight but what is his chakra capacity. He used so many jutsu.

Thanks for the chapter.

So like the tv show elementary. It's a sherlock Holmes Detective drama .

Not really. It's a good troupe. Cringe worthy sometimes but it depends on how it is directed or written.

No .these amount is just fine. More audience and industry people pov chapter .there bring more context and enjoyment to these type of Hollywood movie novel

So he is mentally sick. That's why he did this. My suspense of disbelief is already wavering.

This movie explanation is enjoyable but can you speed up the pace. Often times chapter is all about conversation or a small part of the hollywood lifestyle or process .Please show the audience and the viewers reaction to the movies .Their pov.

Thanks for the chapter

Plot armour 😕

Thanks for the chapter

I think is good It's much better in terms of the potential story and character development . Please don't stop writing this.

Dude, it's just normal people behaviour She's annoyed .

More action and dialogue. At these point it's just vision talking to himself and making plans .instead of reading each chapter as they are updated I now wait few days to a week to stockpile chapters to read once.

Thanks for the chapter .

thanks for the chapter I hope this novel continues for more than another 100 chapters .

Thanks for the chapter it's just amazing and hyped fight. Amazing work author

Its fine Just do 3 chapter a week if it helps to maintain the standard of the fic.