Vanja

This makes no sense. If intelligent otherworldly summons are common enough that they have a process for it, and summoning higher ranked people is common, as it is made to look like here, there is no way this bozo would be the first to find out about higher ranked monsters...

if you let the AI play the editor you need to check the chapter after it's done, or it will hallucinate beds from furniture stores into your chapters while the bed was already there in a previous chapter...

yeah no, i can smell a shity "the evil doppelganger" storyline from miles away. done giving coins to this book, will continue reading with free passes until this is solved.

Because fighting, action really, in webnovels is boring as hell. I usually skip any premium chapters where there is a hint of fighting. The suspense replaced with ridiculous plot armor fights is not interesting and I'd much rather read the characters interacting with the world.

this makes so much sense, you are using chatgpt as an editor, that's why the repetitive language...

This constant double-negative phrasing is annoying as hell. I don’t need to be told what something isn’t every other sentence. Occasionally it’s fine—if there’s a genuine chance of confusing it with something else—but here it’s overused to the point of feeling like a cheap way to pad the word count. The constant “it’s not A, it’s not B, it’s C instead” structure quickly stops being storytelling and starts being filler, creating false tension with empty words. I won’t be continuing once the “free reading” period ends

where's the "what?" at the end?

Kw0z because all countries pay their nurses the same way right? right? right? oh wait, no they don't, fing moron. Plenty of countries out there that abuse people who want to help. nurses, police officers, firefighters - people you rely on when you are scared and hurt.

Earth 1300× bigger but still normal? Sure—if gravity, geology, and the laws of physics all took a vacation at the same time.

The writing quality in this book is genuinely impressive—clear, immersive, and thoughtfully structured. The author clearly knows what they’re doing when it comes to pacing and internal narrative flow. From a psychological standpoint, the main character is well-crafted and consistent with the emotional and mental profile the writer is aiming for. That said, the story is told in first-person, which is both its strength and, for me personally, its greatest drawback. The main character, at least up to the chapter I read, comes across as someone with a rather weak will and a fragile mindset. On its own, this isn't a problem—such traits often serve as fertile ground for meaningful character growth. However, the first-person perspective inherently places the reader inside that mind. When those traits are so pronounced, it can feel as if the narrative is trying to project them onto the reader. And that’s where the dissonance lies. I simply don’t identify with many of the character's internal qualities, and being placed so directly in their shoes made the experience more frustrating than engaging. It’s less about disliking the character and more about the discomfort of being asked—by the very structure of the narrative—to internalize a mindset that feels alien. If you're someone who doesn't mind or even enjoys deeply immersing yourself in a psychologically vulnerable or self-doubting character, then this book may well be a great fit for you. The execution is solid, and the internal logic of the character's perspective is well-maintained. But if first-person immersion only works for you when the protagonist is more aligned with your own worldview or temperament, this might be a tougher read.