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Yanan

Yanan

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2017-10-12 JoinedGlobal
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Commented

    Maybe instead of "fire" damage, it may have been "area" damage?

    [2. Frost Freeze (Level 1): A Frost Marksman's attack can deal ice damage to the enemy. When the target dies, it can deal fire damage to up to 5 targets in the surrounding area.]
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    Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start
    Fantasy · Strange Human
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Posted

    A good start, found it interesting. Then the author got hit on the head by a flying pig. We get Beasts attracted to the MC. Then we get MC becoming a body cultivator. Then we get MC. All the while, losing the Attractiveness System. It's like playing a MOBA game then suddenly you're playing a Music game, then it changes to a text-based novel game even before completing a level. The shift in story lore Nd background is very disturbing. Very hard to keep track of what is happening. The author might have been going for Inception style of writing, or something like Dr. Strange. Just doesn't go well in writing.

    altalt
    My Attractiveness Only Affects Divine Beasts
    Fantasy · Flavored Lollipop
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Posted

    Story completely changes after chapter 70. One moment the MC is playing a game on Earth, the next moment he is transmigrated into the game with no fore warning. It's like the author got hit by a bus, landed in coma and awoke only to have amnesia and continued writing thinking everyone is brain dead like him.

    altalt
    Maxed Out My Passive Skill Due to My Laziness
    Games · No Transmigration
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Posted

    Author often has amnesia and so does the MC. Chapter 1-80, MC has Rune System. Chapter 80-100, MC has Cheat System. Chapter 101-325, MC has Beast Tamer System. Chapter 326, MC has Beast Tamer System but in another form, and somehow forgot everything he has done, and also became younger. I'm at chapter 350 and I see no hope of continuity. The author often changes the storyline, and in each change, the MC often goes through a period of selective amnesia. Forgetting his strengths and gaining weaknesses. Add to the fact that after glancing through the titles for future chapters till 600, there seems to be no link to the past 300 chapters at the start. To everyone who might read this, you can follow my guide above. Read and stop at those points. Leave the novel and come back when you're forgotten everything. It will feel much better than suddenly reading and feeling so annoyed at the changes in the story. Not recommended for those who enjoy a smooth read, or those who actually expect "Shock! The Runes are in English!" instead of "Shock! The MC has amnesia and so does the System!"

    altalt
    Shock! The Spell Is In English!
    Fantasy · Soy Sauce-San
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Commented

    Killed by "thunder", isn't that soundwaves?

    [The Intelligent Horde of the Sky of the World of Shui submits to the Mage/Summoner: Yueliang Haizi. Summoner Yueliang will rule over these orcs as their King. The orcs of the Sky will do anything for their 'King'. Their 'King' Summoner Yueliang will hence forth protect and provide for those of this Horde to the best of his abilities. This contract is to last so long as Summoner Yueliang shall live, however if either side harms the other unjustifiably, they shall be struck down and killed by thunder.
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    Life Drain System
    Fantasy · Yueliang_Haizi
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Replied to Manthony_Jackson

    Totally from that novel, there was another reference from "Mages are too OP" regarding the "Magic Control" and "Magic Material Exemption" abilities/talents a few chapters back.

    However seeing as master does not have enough Shop Credits at this point in time, you can only get the basics. However this is useful as well, just not as great. As much as I would love to say level this up to the max, I feel you should do missions and eventually get the advanced as trying to level this up to the max could get you killed. Also you need to get stronger fast. You unlocking the system has only given you protection for a short two months. Your daily quest will come into full affect once that time is up. At that time any time you fail to complete your daily quest you will be teleported to a dangerous location where you will have to fend for your life until a timer runs out. However there will be rare exceptions, and if you choose to, you could go there of your free will to level up as well, however I really do not recommend that at your current state." Yang said kind of worriedly.
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    Life Drain System
    Fantasy · Yueliang_Haizi
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Posted

    Fairly decent novel. Liked the character progression and story development. Kinda sad that it got castrated in the middle. Like the author got tired of writing and just decided to slap the "Completed" tag on. The last chapter literally ends like a cliff, with no conclusion and leaves the rest to the readers imagination.

    altalt
    The Entire Mankind is Acting As Me, I Shall Secretly Build a Battleship and Shock the World
    Urban · Two Langya Brothers
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Commented

    Magic Control and Magic Material Exemption, it so totally reminds me of "Roland" from "Mages are too OP".

    "One more thing master, as for martial arts, blacksmithing, alchemy, and enchanting. With the knowledge given to you, you are already capable of the best basics. However you will actually need to practice them to become more proficient and fully utilize the knowledge given to you. Although just for doing a demonstration for others, I would say the only thing you need to work on right now is magic. Also one more thing, I recommend doing some missions for coins later in order to buy the equipment for all of these skills, and lastly, I wanted to let you know, you are truly blessed. It seems you were the rare one person in a millennia to be born with the 'magic control' talent, however if that was not enough already, you also got the 'magic material exemption' talent" Yang said, trying to give Yue at least some good news.
    altalt
    Life Drain System
    Fantasy · Yueliang_Haizi
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Commented

    Did you really name the MC "Moonlight Child"? Cause that's what came to mind when seeing the name.

    Name: Yueliang Haizi
    altalt
    Life Drain System
    Fantasy · Yueliang_Haizi
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Posted

    Fantastic read, sucks you straight in. Sadly, it ends at a cliffhanger and just drops the "Completed" tag. Really wish for a continuation for the story.

    altalt
    I Can Create Perfect Accidents.
    Urban · Comfortably Trippy
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  • Yanan
    Yanan2yr
    Posted

    Read up to Chapter 200+ as of now. Kinda liked the title of the novel, but a little hard to understand because the type setting or fonts aren't as defined as other novels with brackets or what nots for skill names and stuff. Also, somewhere along the line. The novel changes from "Runewords are in English", to more of "My Beast Tamer System". It's like the author forgot what he/she was writing about. Maybe there'll be a next volume/arc addressing this thing where the title of the novel is no longer suited to the story. Or how the story is suddenly pulled back to "Runewords are in English". Honestly a good read, still quite miffed about how the story doesn't suit the novel title. Maybe it'll become those "Master of All Paths" kinda thing, because the MC can easily master the powers.

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    Shock! The Spell Is In English!
    Fantasy · Soy Sauce-San
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