SkyRed
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Amante de toda fantástica historia, creador de historias y perezoso escritor.
2017-08-04 JoinedMexico
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SkyRed2yrCommentedque bueno que no es una novela de supremacia china y desprecio para otras naciones.
It was not fawning over Western ideologies nor was it siding with others. It was all just to keep up with others.- SkyRed2yrCommented
yo cuento 5 no 6 peliculas
However, these six movies were not deleted. Conversely, a "Program Error" window popped out. - SkyRed3yrCommented
¿ [img=faceslap]Porque los pisaba?
Even though they are all new species of pokemons to Julian they just caught his curiosity but he soon lost interest in them, sometimes he would feet them and send them away, that is all he did during his stay in the forest. - SkyRed3yrPosted
Algo que enserio me molesta es el texto que tienes por titulo para tu novela.Por que pusiste humano inhumano. Si es humano no puede ser inhumano y si es inhumano no puede ser humano. Te contradices con tu mismo titulo. Y por ese titulo te aseguro que pierdes muchos lectores potenciales. Ya que al ver ese titulo se desaniman en leer tu novela. Te recomiendo que lo cambies y sigas mejorando.
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Algo es matar a alguien, otra cosa es matar a alguien y ser un idiota.[img=faceslap]
Jax still with the same happy smile on his face says to us. "Ehhh it depends really… I might decide to have my way with the girls while you watch or kill you and have fun with the girls while they look at your corpses… or maybe torture some Spiders while you watch… or do both… who knows honestly. It depends on what mood I am, but don't worry, I will kill you all at the end of the day if that happens. Your pain won't last too long."