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Guessing the author is either sick, in a slump, or faced with a sudden tragedy and needs to take time to themselves. Whatever the case may be, I hope things get better for them and I'll be waiting for whenever they decide to continue, if they decide to continue.
"a paragraph comment here ;)" I've left it, now what?
Clop? It was only a matter of time for this reference to arrive. Especially since the Nightmare arrived and those panthers from a couple floors ago.
Yep. Well... It's SAO season 2, not SAO Alternative: GGO. Though the game is GGO.
These journeymen work by the hour. They're hourneymen.
Ayyy bugs are a frequent meal item in some cultures (grasshoppers, etc).
i want to picture the scene, but the only thing that comes to mind is the massive amount of stuttering and low frames from trying to render the various spell effects.
It's all about that Flow state.
He's getting closer to Susanoo levels.
It's not a pile bunker but it'll do.
Is this the third coming of Elijah?
I feel like there's a chapter missing. The comments about a god or fallen fighting nearby as well as their attempts to cut the wing, and when did aron get burned? Generally you tend to have a chapter, or even a brief interlude explaining events like this, and not seeing one here just referencing events that happened, but weren't shown to the reader, is quite jarring.
Airom's past?
It cost her an arm. Or it caused her to lose an arm?
In reference to your author's note: Codes are Paths though, if your earlier description was accurate (from a couple of chapters ago). Or at least whatever is past a Path is a code (since you have some similar naming sense between novels). This novel feels more like 'Law of Duality: Explained', with constant references to different types of duality as an analogy. I like it, so def continue as is. I like being made aware of the high level stuff early, even if not fully explaining everything, but giving the reader enough to make connections for when the really abstract stuff gets mentioned later on. I really like your descriptions for these high concept depictions of foundational building blocks of the universe.