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Cause it's Ai slop. If authors would atl change it a little but no. Just Trash with a good idea like so many other fanfics on this site nowadays

I think it's more like Stockholm syndrome. What you said made sense but both things are completely different imo

Makes sense. I just need to look at it as a feel good novel with not much depth and it's readable for me. Tho I like villains only if the story kinda forces them to be but just for fun is not my cup of tea

Is there a reason for the amount of evil things he does. I thought he was like a chaotic neutral figure, but this destruction of everything is kinda boring and not as enjoyable as on his planet

Btw read more than 1 ch

Just bad writing. It doesn't have flow weird grammar if not translation. Idea is fine but boring clishees. Wouldn't recommend but biggest problem is just writing and flow/organzation. Maybe a clean storyboard could help

Interesting story and premise but writing feels very mechanically. The author only uses short sentences like spys when they're infiltrating something and you hear their monologue. like the protagonist is a robot in disguise. And it's the most typical I'm the biggest good person in the world. I don't want edgy but it also doesn't feel like hardship for me since it's obs he's gonna save everyone like an anime prof. World building and power system is nice enough and he's not opop. All in all its good enough if you're a witcher fan and you don't care much about clean writing(maybe it's just bad Ai translations) else scim or skip this

Why does he speak like a robot. Many short sentences without ant flow at all. Is it written with Ai cause there's no way q writer would use Dialog like this without wanting to sound like a robot

Aight im stopping now. There are too many logic fallicies for me. And the writing, I don't wanna say it's bad but it's not one bit to my liking. Gl

I don't understand the character of this Naruto. Has he lived all the experiences or did he just saw it like a movie. The way he's described as tired or "veteran" sounds more like he act lived all of this. But then last chapter he has an outburst like a crazy dumb child. Makes no sense the way the author describes him but i rather hope he goes the more mature way. Having both a child and mature mentality typically is rage inducing on this app