Story has an interesting take on the game elements and the characters have been given more development than the average Chinese xianxia, but the story can get a bit annoying at times when things aren't properly explained. My biggest gripe, however, is the frequent spelling and grammar mistakes. Some of these should be easily caught with a basic word processor, but many others are homophones or just similar sounding words that are not at all related. If these were infrequent I wouldn't mind so much, but they often occur several times a chapter or even multiple times in a sentence to the point it becomes illegible. Going over some of these earlier chapters to fix these mistakes would probably be a good idea to retain new readers.

Only our boy Lin Huang can brush off 200 years of closed door cultivation at the age of 20 or whatever.

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Google translate will only get you so far...

Going a step further and calculating the time to reach level 20 nets us a time of about 120,000 years, now to fit that in to the 100 years he gets per level, from the very beginning he would have to be cultivating at a rate of 60 times faster than he currently is, and he would have to cultivate 24/7 every day forever. So more realistically he needs to up his speed by several hundred for it to even be worth while past a certain point. This optimal point is level 9, as after this point it takes longer to cultivate than the extra lifespan you receive, and that's also assuming you cultivate nonstop. Equation used is 2000*2^(n-1)=hours needed Where n is the level you are trying to achieve.

In case anyone was wondering, after doing the math, the main character on average only spent 3 hours per day cultivating to reach his current level.