easily one of my new favorite books on this site. there are few grammatical errors here and there but not enough to distract from the story being told. can't wait for more! if you don't have someone proof reading your stuff now I would be more than happy to help you out!

ITS BACK!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!

are there going to be any more updates for this story? it has been forever since there has been an update. did the story get dropped or something??

when can I expect more?

so still just trying to get the authors attention. this needs to be cleaned up and I'd love to help you out with it. can't say it'll be perfect but it'll be better than what it is now

HELLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

When can I expect more?

Update: I have finished all the chapters available at this time ( 7 chapters ) and i feel no need to change my rating for this series

Yes still here, still checking back again.

Lets start this out with I have NOT started reading the story yet, I came here from rise of the undead legion. Loved that series so I'm gonna give this one a shot now. I will update the review IF I feel like it doesn't deserve the full 5 stars. But every other series I've read by biako is great so I'm not too worried.

back again

yep still here

back back back again. . . still nothing?

and again

Checking back again

Checking back periodically to see if their are any replies or any interest.

Checking back periodically to see if their are any replies or any interest.

does the author still check these? I love the story but the grammar and such kills me. . . I'd be more than willing to help with the editing? I enjoy this story to much to be ok with the grammar screwing it up. if you send me some of the earlier sections I can do some samples. . . . reply to this comment if you're interested at all