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shadowfox98011mthCommentedremember your part*
"Remember part of the deal," Raze said. "I'm sending you back and out of this place, and you promise to do what you can to protect them."- shadowfox98011mthReplied to StrawHat14
would lose out > wouldn't lose out* thank you for making me double-check as I forgot there were 2 copies of the word lol
The thing was, Gary had gotten a boost from the Altered that day, far more than he would have gotten from the beasts that had their crystal removed. So honestly, unlike before, he didn’t feel like he would lose out too much if he stopped attending. Nevertheless, he would still have his debut match to become a proper AFC fighter. - shadowfox98011mthReplied to Biojest
and yet this reply proves my correction to be valid.
"But you, young child, after watching you for so long, and seeing what you just did. You are able to perform both correctly, you have a magic core and a dantian," Amir stated. - shadowfox98011mthReplied to Biojest
if you read the paragraph properly, he is talking about using them both at the same time. hence my correction.
"But you, young child, after watching you for so long, and seeing what you just did. You are able to perform both correctly, you have a magic core and a dantian," Amir stated. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
foott >foot*
"You, no one will care about you; I will take you out." Murkel lifted his foott off from Dame and placed it on the floor. - shadowfox98012mthReplied to chimychimes
it was a correction......
Gary found Blackjack’s response somewhat odd but chose to overlook it for now. Blackjack, meanwhile, pondered whether to mention Gary’s power and how it weakened the Warden. Revealing this would mean explaining how he knew about it, and there were still a few more things he wanted to get done. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
correctly > concurrently * or replace "correctly" with "at the same time"
"But you, young child, after watching you for so long, and seeing what you just did. You are able to perform both correctly, you have a magic core and a dantian," Amir stated. - shadowfox98012mthReplied to Jesk8
possibly but very slim chance
"Although in my case, for me who was dragged to the bottom of the pits and always had to stare at the sky. I will drag everyone down below me, so my view is that of the top." - shadowfox98012mthCommented
Green > Greed*
“Raven, you head to Burnham and deal with the mess there. Gil… let’s attack them where it hurts; why don’t you head to the hospital, and Glutton, take out this bird man for me, and don’t fail. Green and Garbo, us three will be on standby, but I hope we don’t have to get involved,” Sin ordered. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
is this how*
‘Is this is how it’s going to be, are we going to lose someone right off the bat of trying this damned thing!’ Kai thought. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
test > text*
The curious whispers and gossip among each of them had gone deadly silent for a moment. Even though the test had made things quite clear, they thought it was a figure of speech. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
first "back" is redundant
In response to this, Eston opened his mouth wide, and a large amount of wind back had hit the Qi, to the point that it had been sent right back. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
tenacity > techniques *
At the same time, Kizer lifted his large sword and was ready. He was limited with the amount of tenacity he had left that he could do, but even swinging it normally with Qi gave him great power due to the number of opponents around. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
interrupted > erupted*
She had turned around, thinking of running, but the moment she did, a large wall had interrupted in front of her. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
more powerful *
“Do you know what makes a Werewolf stronger? It’s their pack. The larger their pack is, the more power the leader is as well as the rest of you. Werewolves were meant to hunt together, not split apart.” - shadowfox98012mthCommented
haphazardly*
He would have never had this power without Gary, so he didn’t want to use it hazardly. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
agent storm > giant storm*
Amir spun his body, gathered his Qi, and both the sword and his leg clashed again. The shockwave created shifted the rubble and broken trees like an agent storm pushing them to the side. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
let loose the arrow or let go of the bowstring*
The other members witnessing this did the same, and the first one to fire away was Froma as she let go of the arrow. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
yourself in our shoes*
"If that's how you feel, you should try to put ourselves in our shoes," Cronker commented. - shadowfox98012mthCommented
weak state*
Raze was right in front of her, and still in his weak self, but Feebie was hurt as well. Blood was coming out from her mouth from the direct hit from Alba and the fighting from before.